Daniel Aliff - Concrete Conversation (feat. Profit Money)

[The Hand of God]

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myself feat. Morgantown, WV rapper/producer Profit Money over 'The Clipse - Kinda Like a Big Deal (Instrumental)'

wordplay out the ass in this one

left feed on a few other tracks, leave feed for me and i'll definitely return the favor

[Loon E Lou]

Ok ok man, shits right on homie. Beats dope, but folks already knew that the first time it came out. Quality was above par imo. Maybe jus match it to the beat a lil more. Im a fan of the one track flows, but in those lil gaps on the verse, a few adlibs or seconds would definetly put more emphasis and hyp in what ur spittin. Vocab was ku. I dunno about wordplay out the ass but above par as well. For wordplay an shit like that, peep Menace's "on top" track. Its on the illest mixtape. That shit is raw all the way through. But back to ur ish. You seem to know what ur doin dawg so id say jus keep it movin how ur doin, cop some original beats, and ur all the way straight man. Welcome to illest pimpin

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[The Hand of God]

thanks for the feed

i'll check for that shit when i get back from work later today

but i think you'll hear more wordplay if you listen closely

there's about 6 double entendres in the first 8 bars

[The Hand of God]

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[Alvin]

Kind of like a big deal? lol. You have a nice flow man, real direct and nice presence. Mix is clean, but with a name like The Hand Of God, it better be. I was able to understand everything, punchline friendly. The first dick reference was good, crane and all, but the second dick reference wasnt a fan of. The second dudes quality was a little lacking. Sounded a lot muddier than yours did. Shits nice man, I'd like to hear some topical shit, outside of I'm hard and you're not. Keep posting man. Shits pretty much fire. Did second verse, profit money, really run out of shit lol?

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I think you meant SOUNDCLOUD right?

[illadelphiakid]

Yo both verses were tight, i thought the 2nd had a better flow, but the first was better quality. Ya i dunno bout wordplay out the ass, but u had some nice lines. Production was there, a lil more work n u got urself something to toss around. do ur thing.

[The Hand of God]

Kind of like a big deal? lol. You have a nice flow man, real direct and nice presence. Mix is clean, but with a name like The Hand Of God, it better be. I was able to understand everything, punchline friendly. The first dick reference was good, crane and all, but the second dick reference wasnt a fan of. The second dudes quality was a little lacking. Sounded a lot muddier than yours did. Shits nice man, I'd like to hear some topical shit, outside of I'm hard and you're not. Keep posting man. Shits pretty much fire. Did second verse, profit money, really run out of shit lol?

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I think you meant SOUNDCLOUD right?

SoundClick, SoundCloud, Sound______

fuck it haha

and yea, he said he was spitting and he messed up and just said 'i give up'

as far as the wordplay goes, i'll break down a little bit of the first part

Breathe In, Breathe Out is a Kanye song, who had his jaw wired....Death Wish/Rockin' With The Best are Jadakiss songs.....Open Up and Say... Ahh!/Native Tongue are Poison albums....Mos Def/Common are Native Tongues members....

there's a Darryl Hannah reference in there to, i just got no idea what it was anymore haha

thanks for the feed guys

[The Hand of God]

thank you sir

last bump on this one