Where I Stand #8

[complexity]

the world is an open canvas yet we paint black n white
most of us stay up half the night like we hafta write
to bring a track to life even if that means attacking christ
our souls price is gatz n ice, our flows nice on cold nights
our lyrics we hold tight, n we battle demons in an old fight
that we cant seem to win, so we keep inhaling the poison
choking as we breath it in, deadly toxins,still receiving them
until we leave in a heavy coffin, everyone has regrets
thoughts that were lost in, a moment we left behind
we cant take it back, cuz thats how deaths designed
so i decided next time i rhyme to spit whats on my mind
today its mankind which i see as a god damn lie
though when i die, i want the truth to be public
i want to be true to the judges, so thats the subject
im thru with the grudges, so lets all be cousins

i questioned gods existance thats blasphemy
which means im going to hell whose coming after me
who will save me from this tragedy if i pray daily
will it out weight the sin thats deep within my soul
who can i console im losing all control confusing what i know
every things took a toll i dont even look the same
i thought i shook the pain but its back it never went away
its like a plaque decaying my vains i strain to say it
i want to put it away but it comes back with hatred
hell is not a fire to play with im afraid to cave in
im not that brave kid just sitting here jaded
yet if im gods creation then why do i play him?
theirs no escaping the truth it lies deep within you
you can see it in the sunrise the light that comes thru
but when the sun dies it makes you look like a fool
let me whipe my eyes when i cry its a fuel

yo, give me a weapon we will arm the legend
we taking the rap profession to armageddon
inside the lesson of the scripture I have written
is wisdom that goes beyond predictions of convictions
past the contradictions that puts restrictions on victims
its the song thats sickened by all these depictions
missing visions of decisions made before you were living
as a teen i lived in contradiction as a Christian
let my mind free now it seems god might finally listen
im not a slave ripping pages to find existence
i dont give a fuck about you, just mind your business
or ill nail ur wrist like jesus, n use the blood to sign ur shit list
Im twisted you can see that from a distance
i hear you talk shit, dont mean I have a sixth sense
the ignorance that you display everyday
is sickening Im trying to live life a better way

[16 Micz]

Fav Line:(i questioned gods existance thats blasphemy
which means im going to hell whose coming after me )

pretty dope verse, i dont think ive seen u write on a topic like this....and write deep(not saying u dont write deep) but anyway, i liked the rhyming vocab was on point as usual but the verse wasnt very interesting in my opinon cause the rhythm and tone i guess(if u understand) but it was still worth the read i guess

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

Tha First Bars Were Tha Best Outta This Whole Drop ..
i Thought it Was Really Lyrical .. Multies Made it a Lil Bit Complex ..
& Tha Few Punches U Had also Made it a Great Drop ..
One Of Tha Best Drops i Read all Week .. Good Shit ..

[complexity]

Micz its because the premise was to contradict myself. And there was nothing to tie them together perfectly. So when you were done reading it. You weren't satisfied with the conclusion. Just an assumption