Grimm vs BennyBones (Grimm wins KO)

[Grim]

5 bars(10 lines) house rules..24-48 hrs due..respect...no flips

[BennyBones]

check.... and uppin

[Grim]

BennyBones? More like Benny Hill,You're a fucking joke.
With a tattoo on your throat that says "suck don't choke"

Which is quite ironic since you're about to do both.
You must be on break from your pedicure and afternoon soaps.

I'll spit this battery acid flow till all that's left is Benny's Bones.
You're all TALK and SHOW..You're that bitch Jenny Jones (replace j's with b's)

"Throwing BONES" ain't hard at all he's softer then a chinchilla.
Freeze tag'll leave Bones stiff but My gat'll leave Ben "Stiller"

Listen JILL, you'll get JACKed and tumble down climbing this mental hill.
My bullets are like allergy pills the way they give "BEN-A-DRILL"(benadryl)

[BennyBones]

not gonna lie look into his eyes yea hes a fly faggot/
because your family tree states that your a inbred shit maggot/

its tragic,how hes a one hit wounder, simular to the hansons/
i never thought id battling the real marilyn manson/

good luck with the cock suckin britney i hope u got gills/
i can pitcher the cum around ur lips now...mmm, got milk?/

and his moms got dibs, damn it really dose run in the family outstanding/
congrats, genis is holding u the the record for b-j's while standing/

who u foolin grims real name is amber/
and amber nits quilts with her nanny in pampers/awww...




not my best but will do... good luk to both,uppin...

[pest]

]Grimm

BennyBones? More like Benny Hill,You're a fucking joke.
With a tattoo on your throat that says "suck don't choke"
1st good, 2nd notso hott

Which is quite ironic since you're about to do both.
You must be on break from your pedicure and afternoon soaps.
not muchofa punch... decent tho.

I'll spit this battery acid flow till all that's left is Benny's Bones.
You're all TALK and SHOW..You're that bitch Jenny Jones (replace j's with b's)
Pretty solid... Good

"Throwing BONES" ain't hard at all he's softer then a chinchilla.
Freeze tag'll leave Bones stiff but My gat'll leave Ben "Stiller"
The ben stiller line woulda been dope if you played off it... decent punch

Listen JILL, you'll get JACKed and tumble down climbing this mental hill.
My bullets are like allergy pills the way they give "BEN-A-DRILL"(benadryl)
closer coulda been stronger...



BB

not gonna lie look into his eyes yea hes a fly faggot/
because your family tree states that your a inbred shit maggot/
weak

its tragic,how hes a one hit wounder, simular to the hansons/
i never thought id battling the real marilyn manson/
weak... hanson n marylin manson are nothing alike... your rhyming to rhyme not to hit man.

good luck with the cock suckin britney i hope u got gills/
i can pitcher the cum around ur lips now...mmm, got milk?/
Did you really just say mmmm after you said you can picture him with cum around his lips??

and his moms got dibs, damn it really dose run in the family outstanding/
congrats, genis is holding u the the record for b-j's while standing/
Prolly the best punch you got so far... not mucha one tho.

who u foolin grims real name is amber/
and amber nits quilts with her nanny in pampers/awww
...

MVGT GRIMM

He had better punches... more creativity...
Better wordplay and name flipps...

[BennyBones]

lol was speakin as if it was him in a commercial, and manson and hanson arent suppose to be together two diffrent lines.... fair enof tho

-- Wed Apr 06, 2011 5:29 am --

and u need more post to vote bro...

[Kuhlerblynd]

Actually he doesnt need more posts to vote... He has over 50 posts AND has been in more than one battle... Just to clear the air on that. He gave a breakdown also, so his vote counts fam. That's in the rules.

[BennyBones]

thought he need a hundred... thats how it was when i started no matter if u battles or not.... its all good

[Kuhlerblynd]

ALSO - If you do not specify that someone under 50 votes cannot vote on your battle, then someone under fifty votes CAN vote on your battle.

Just so you know, that's written in this link, which is IN the battle forum. not because Im trying to argue with you, I think arguing is stupid, but because it is the rules, and I think rules have meaning...

Oh here's the link for those rules underneath, in case anything else might come about...

I gave you the benefit by saying that the guy DIDNT have under 50 posts, but had posted in battles. As the rule clearly states, I was WRONG, just like you said. Its only disallowed IF ITS STATED in the rules of YOUR battle, which it was not. Sorry bro... Doing my job.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/battl ... 18480.html

[BennyBones]

never took it personal, this is only for fun win lose or draw, just was an misunderstanding.... been a while

but he did state house rules.....respects

[Grim]

1-0 me

[BennyBones]

yup.... yo wanna rematch after this?... just sayin i normaly give the battles i do another try.... practice makes perfect

[Grim]

i got you..i have like four or five battles i really want to close out first but soon for sure

[BennyBones]

yup

[S3V3NTH1RTY]

Punches/Personals - Grimm, benny really didnt have any and the couple attempts he had didnt hit hard enough to go anywhere
Multies - Grimm
Flow/Structure - Grimm, benny's was choppy at points
similies/Metaphors- Grimm, again benny barely had any similies at all.
Nameflips - Grimm, benny had none whatsoever.

so overall MVGT-GRIMM...decent battle but grimm took it in all categories..benny if you work on all aspects of your writing
your drops will become stronger and a much more enjoyabe read