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As i awake people cry "eyes closed"
taking "side roads" streets "hide gold"
cant get rim of "my cold" its like "high told"
through "My flow" like "why yo"
i "move slowly" in the streets "call me penis"
the genius walk swiftly "kali leanest"
"tall me seemliss" hit ya with "clipz quick"
under sick shit its twisted like "disc-lite"
i "rip it" with fantastic flow "blast the hoe"
fast or slow im the best to go u know
so its crazy as i wake "people die"
the "steeple fly" the "sequel try"
now you awake to the "evil guy"

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ayo nigga dat some hot shit yo
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"i "move slowly" in the streets "call me penis"
the genius walk swiftly "kali leanest""

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-bows head-

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lol Damn u Ayn Doin A Good job Tryna "make fun" Ov Me .. I Jus Noticed Dat Feed Back lol It Made
Sense But You Cant Read My Typin I Guess ??
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Alotta Forced Multis Work On Ya Structure i See
Some Potential Plex LOL
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Post by Typeo »

you don't even know what you're talking about...ever.

Its nice, good structure, funny concept. And it makes sense.
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^ lmao
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Typeo wrote:you don't even know what you're talking about...ever.

Its nice, good structure, funny concept. And it makes sense.
lol typeo its obvious he wuz fuckin around..ne ways plex i liked it,no fav lines cuz i thought overall it was decent nothi really stuck out but it was good --1--
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