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Grim vs Mack Lazarus

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5 bars..48 hours due from check..house rules..no flips...let's get it
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Out to rip the Grim reaper a new sphincter. I'm a thinker. A thought processor.
A rhyme de-briefer and debt collector. I'll be givin the commands and your reply will be, "Yes sir!"

Brrr it's cold. You heard what you need ta know from my never repeated flows
Fakers fall like dominos. Now vamonos muchachos

This gato's hot like hot sauce n tacos. Or lava flows
No impossible obstacles could stop this bro. Now you gotsta go.

It's awesome though if you wanna know.
I need cheese n cream like a pasta bowl.

I know I'm doin damage but this food talks got me famished
Man, this dude rocks but now my third person needs a sandwich.
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My raps are hazardous..like a MAC(K) to the back of LAZARUS.
Who's tracks sMACK my ears like when a spoiled girl has-a-fit.

You whinny bitch!Do us all a favor and swallow a Tic-Tac..
Talking shit and starting "beef"? HA! You ain't that BIG..MAC

(sing this 3rd line like the chorus of smack that by akon and eminem)

Mack's Fat..and he's a whore,Mack's wack..yeah that's for sure.
Mack's tracks..make my ears sore, break MACK'S back oo-o-ooooh.

Another MACK in the rap game...How original...
I'll crack and snap MACK'S frame..That's not subliminal.

This is suicide against me MACK..slit your LAZA-wrist. (lazarus)
Before I reduce ya to a puddle of blood and plasma-quick!!
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Re: Grim vs Mack Lazarus

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That was fresh Grim. Lots of good stuff in there.

Big props

Thanks for the Battle
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no prob..you have some writing skills..you'll figure out battling
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Post by M33Kish »

Flow-grimm
Multies-grimm
Punches-grimm
Nameflips-grimm
Wordplay-grimm

Mvgt-grimm

Sweep pretty much, mack you've got nice multies but none of them fit for a battle verse, it was more self hype than anything. Keep battling and come up with clever punches to win battles.

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Re: Grim vs Mack Lazarus

Post by Moneymaker »

Flow-mack
Mulities-grimm
Punches-grimm
nameflip-grimm
wordplay-grimm
enjoyment-mack

MVGT-GRIMM

Mack you got alot of potenial you just got to battle a little bit more

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Re: Grim vs Mack Lazarus

Post by Mack Lazarus »

Thanks for the words.

though I think i'm getn docked for not enough shit talk.
(i didnt mean for that to rhyme...)

I'll step up the insults...but im not a natural smack talk artist
I'm more into seeing where the rhyme goes.

If anyone is down to do a battle where punches are not required,
but not dis-allowed either. just straight up clever enjoyment, hit me

But I'm down to go again with the same house rules.

If I WAS allowed to vote, I'd say:

Flow-M
Multies-M
Punches-Griminal
nameflip-Griminal
wordplay-Griminal
enjoyment-M

Lets go again

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upping for votes to close
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You know it was kind of one-sided as far as battles go, but the writing potential is there for you Lazarus. You are fucking funny...although MVGT:GRIM

I'm having a grilled cheese now...sound good?
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Re: Grim vs Mack Lazarus

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3-0 me k.o.....good battle
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Re: Grim vs Mack Lazarus

Post by Mack Lazarus »

mmmm yummy!

Thanks Mitty!





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