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simple tracks i did

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made it on a ordinary lab top, some ove them i didnt even clean but still sounded aight to me... let me know what you think...

i made the beat on life also...

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/some- ... 21797.html
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Positive feedback only? How u supposed to excell man? Any feedback is good feedback if u ask me.

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Doin me mp3....
Listenin, Southern shit.... My type of flava...
Chorus is definately nice....but topic is played out as fuck...no diss...
The second verse and that singin shit needs to either be cut or autotuned or somthin...shit just dont fit... All together an average drop...

Remember to bring yourself into your music... all that doin me shit is played out but if you gon' do a song called doin me, dig deeper than what most people would and put some real shit on the track... It was a nice drop... Your flow is good... lyrics are average but they fit the song... Good track... 7/10 (mainly cuz of that singin shit)...lol... But good track homey... My type of music... Bring out some more creativity on it...
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no doubt... belive it or not i freestyled it all.. got the idea from jay-z's black album...
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Post by HKX »

Life is 1 sick beat mixin' is not dat bad I like wat u did wit da ad libs 4 it how they sound 4rm left 2 right not sure if u did panned it or not... if u did props. Hook is nice as well I feel like da verses stood out more tho. Keep droppin' I dig so far.
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