Evolution vs. Rellik

[Ambiguous Realm]

8 bars due Friday

[Ambiguous Realm]

lol cmon, u called me out and said friday or saturday...i guess i need to drop first for you



News Flash! "Rellik seeks easy battles"...now let's prepare the bulletin

Victory must weigh a ton, that's why you can barely pull a win...
You're a disease of mine i cured, & i'll never CARRY YOU AGAIN!! *

You're probably still looking for punchlines, like "where's the beverages?"
Compared to parentage, you let down more partners than affairs in marriages, **

I'd beat the snot out of u but it'd be a waste of mucus, from Rugged to Rellik, i lost track of all the names you lose with, ***
against me.. it's simple i win, that's what a basic rule is, Mr. "I AM NOT A RAPPER" just because you've never faced the MUSIC! ****

so u show a "little late"? whoa..a skillful trait, but no matter how much of a burden you are..you're always below the middleweights!
and fuck what this Skittled face kid'll say!, cuz a quick mistake..will get this sinful gay to sit n wait by the phone until his 'mixed signal' fades!

this drug addicted sharpie-eater party creature probably zones out to his Ed Hardy sneakers while sparking ether,
in shame he got a new team, a new name, that goes to show your broke ass is always 'making change' like parking meters!

Your occupation's writing and you pursue to write the front page, so basically you're just stupid like the young age,
And one day... i'll come a-cross this idiot n crucify that dumb face, then put this killeR in a depressed suicidal-jump phase,

It's clear his bars are nothing nice, thats why he joined a crew, now he can be part of something tight..,
I'll 'shoot blanks', cause you'll still get raped in this battle till your heart is pumping white!

You're as retarded as you're bright,lol seriously.. keeping all your lyrics on file just in case of 'targets' that'll bite..?
When obviously any artist on the site that's smart enough in life wouldn't harvest half the likes of the garbage that you write!

*Expo's for Dummies*

* he slacked as my partner for a tournament (http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/rugge ... 18102.html & http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/round ... gged%20evo)
** same reason as above
*** Rugged Eros, R.E. Yroc, Rellik..name's he's gone by (i think that's all of them)
**** clearly says he's not a rapper in his interests, and he doesn't do audio(music)

(everything else should be obvious)

[leeroi green]

well this was a good battle well done gentlemen um lets see

punches evo but only by a bar very close

multis evo both did well underlines did not affect my decision

personals rell funny evo was actually talking to me when he said that, sneaky

flow tie both were very easy to read pieces

enjoyment goes to evo but just to be clear i liked rell's final bar a lot better than evo's seriously i had to read twice just to make sure i am being fair cus each cat was so close

again dope battle MVGT evolution

[Grim]

First of all great battle and i hate to have to pick a winner but here we go
EVO:
BAR1:nice opening wordplay but a generic punch.still good 3/5
BAR2:decent..liked the personal reference..3/5
BAR3:good set up and punch 4/5
BAR4:another solid punch and set up 4/5
BAR5:funnier then hard hitting and generic but good 3/5
BAR6:again like the personal note and nice execution 4/5
BAR7:i get more personal reference but eeehhh.. 2/5
BAR8:ok closer..maybe better in a different spot.. 3/5
26/40...i really liked this verse and your approach
RELLIK:
BAR1:great opener great wordplay and a personal reference 5/5
BAR2:great wordplay but not quite as hard as the first bar 4/5
BAR3:this was clever and made me laugh..maybe my fav but generic 5/5
BAR4:not bad..good concept and wordplay 4/5
BAR5:i get where you were going and liked the play but eehh. 3/5
BAR6:solid wordplay and personal-ish..4/5
BAR7:this was your weakest bar for me but still ok 3/5
BAR8:solid closer but still could be harder 4/5
31/40..i just loved the wordplay
FLOW:TIE
PUNCHES:RELLIK/both did great but rellik was more creative/better effect
MULTIES:EVO..just seemed like he nailed them to me and seemed unforced
PERSONALS:EVO/this was fairly close though..rellik had some too
Enjoyment:RELLIK..the complexity made for a better read for me
BEING that the cats were tied i have to go by individual bars and so..

MVGT:RELLIK barely

[Demo+]

Opener. Evo
Multies. Evo
Flow. Evo
Punches/Metaphors. Evo
Personals. Evo
Vocab. Evo
Closer. Evo


This Battle Was Closer Than What My Cats Show But Evo Really Took All Tha Cats.. Real Talk He Had An Ill Battle Verse. . From Tha Multies To Tha Punchlines.. You Stretch Ya Bars Tho.. It Didnt Kill You In This Battle Tho.. Rellik.. Good Verse Too..Jus Add More Metas N Multies..

V/Evo

[ScottJames]

rellik:

He says 8 bars, so w/ his stretched shit that's 20 lines worth, Copycat did Scott teach that?
I ain't a fucking rapper but I'm being heard "On A Major Scale" with how I just "Dropped E FLAT!"

THIS WAS SICK!

Ya forced shit is "So-Nadda" so watch me "Trump-it", then start chucking off that fucking loss
Cuz thanks to "Evolution Being Fake" I lost to Jesus... That's what I call being "Double Crossed"

NOT BAD. FLOW WAS CHOPPY. THE WORDPLAY WAS DOPE THOUGH.

I don't care if Jehovah witnesses it, I'll leave the door bloody & the floor muddy
Peel back banana clips while Evolution's hanging in front of his crib ... PORCH MONKEY!!!

WASNT FEELING THIS.

Yeah I killed your confidence, call it a "drive bye", listen Geek cuz this is heat
It's no mystery you suck, "Your Evolution" as n' emcee is bullshit & this is the "Missing Link"

HUH?.

I hope the voters here come w/ an open ear for a change, I hope they hear that you're lame
Otherwise for you the coast is clear, cuz ya fake ass flow is more "Smoke & Mirrors" than ya "Fake Ass Name"
(Ekoms) Real talk.

LMAO. THIS WAS NASTY. GOOD THINKING.!

*I suggest you learn them & stop relying on forced multies, you're literally a "Fake Rap Reference"
I can't tell if you talking bout ya half-ass delivery or ya family's christmas tree when you said... "I-Lack-Presence..."

THIS CONCEPT IS TOO PLAYED IMO.

Hit ya sis in her Dodge Neon, Evo got a "Niece-On", by now it's in an orphanage I bet
Then I skipped court & jumped Evo, drove the lane to Illinois, pulled out my balls & SLAMMED JOURDAN ON THE NET!!!"

AND U SAID MY BARS R STRETCHED...SMH.. COOL CONCEPT THOUGH.

Your EX-STINKED, get it?, I didn' take her out I ate her out, so pussy you ain't helping keep down the hurl
I hope this "L You Have Now" "Brings You Down To Earth" cuz it was just "SEEN ROUND THE WORLD!!!"

MEH. DIDNT CARE FOR THE CLOSER.




Victory must weigh a ton, that's why you can barely pull a win...
You're a disease of mine i cured, & i'll never CARRY YOU AGAIN!!

THIS WAS COOL. GOOD PERSONAL.

You're probably still looking for punchlines, like "where's the beverages?"
Compared to parentage, you let down more partners than affairs in marriages,

LOL. PRETTY FUNNY..

I'd beat the snot out of u but it'd be a waste of mucus, from Rugged to Rellik, i lost track of all the names you lose with, ***
against me.. it's simple i win, that's what a basic rule is, Mr. "I AM NOT A RAPPER" just because you've never faced the MUSIC!

FIRST LINE WAS BETTER THAN THE LASTS.

so u show a "little late"? whoa..a skillful trait, but no matter how much of a burden you are..you're always below the middleweights!
and fuck what this Skittled face kid'll say!, cuz a quick mistake..will get this sinful gay to sit n wait by the phone until his 'mixed signal' fades!

AGAIN, PRETTY DECENT CONCEPT.

this drug addicted sharpie-eater party creature probably zones out to his Ed Hardy sneakers while sparking ether,
in shame he got a new team, a new name, that goes to show your broke ass is always 'making change' like parking meters!

YEAH, THIS WAS DOPE..AND LOL @ SHARPIE EATER..

Your occupation's writing and you pursue to write the front page, so basically you're just stupid like the young age,
And one day... i'll come a-cross this idiot n crucify that dumb face, then put this killeR in a depressed suicidal-jump phase,

NO.

It's clear his bars are nothing nice, thats why he joined a crew, now he can be part of something tight..,
I'll 'shoot blanks', cause you'll still get raped in this battle till your heart is pumping white!

NO.

You're as retarded as you're bright,lol seriously.. keeping all your lyrics on file just in case of 'targets' that'll bite..?
When obviously any artist on the site that's smart enough in life wouldn't harvest half the likes of the garbage that you write!

NO. GOOD MULTIS THOUGH.

MY VOTE GOES TO RELLIK... MORE CONSISTENT AND HARDER PUNCHES. GOOD BATTLE THOUGH FELLAS. PEACE.

[Ambiguous Realm]

uppin for votes, i know there's more than 4 people on this site

[Genesis]

Yo man I would have to go with what Grim said.
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/bitch ... ml#p171121

[Joe Saint]

Punches-rellik
Flow-rellik
Enjoyment-rellik
Mvgt-rellik


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/splis ... ml#p171209

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[EcKsTaSy]

by my count it was 56 - 53 with each bar being worth up to 10...Rellik barely took it

awesome battle fellas..

vote: Rellik

[Alvin]

Evolution granted voting permission to CI


Evolution:

Victory must weigh a ton, that's why you can barely pull a win...
You're a disease of mine i cured, & i'll never CARRY YOU AGAIN!! *
To my knowledge, he tems to win a lot lol. But i can see how you connected it to the personal. Even though it is a personal, it loses a lot of value seeing how old the reference is.
You're probably still looking for punchlines, like "where's the beverages?"
Compared to parentage, you let down more partners than affairs in marriages, **
Nice wordplay with the punchline. The personal seems to be the same, but because of the multies you were able to have a better effect in it. After looking up the exact definition of parentage, I like how the punch is all tied in... but on first read, it felt forced in a way to meet the multi.
I'd beat the snot out of u but it'd be a waste of mucus, from Rugged to Rellik, i lost track of all the names you lose with, ***
against me.. it's simple i win, that's what a basic rule is, Mr. "I AM NOT A RAPPER" just because you've never faced the MUSIC! ****
LOL, this one had the right amount of everything, personals, punch, multies, but i will sday, it read stupid long. I may just be used to audio style of writing, but that felt and read like 2 bars all in one.
so u show a "little late"? whoa..a skillful trait, but no matter how much of a burden you are..you're always below the middleweights!
and fuck what this Skittled face kid'll say!, cuz a quick mistake..will get this sinful gay to sit n wait by the phone until his 'mixed signal' fades!
lol, again... on this one it was definitly too long for me to enjoy. I got caught up with all the internal rhyming that the punch didnt come soon enough. I also want to point out the "sinful gay" completely through it off for me. Yes its a multi, but i feel you gave up a little execution to satisfy your multi needs.
this drug addicted sharpie-eater party creature probably zones out to his Ed Hardy sneakers while sparking ether,
in shame he got a new team, a new name, that goes to show your broke ass is always 'making change' like parking meters!
The rhyme scheme on the first line was dope as shit... but the second line read a little weird to me. The actual bar itself has some pretty original name calling,but its also rather open, unless they're personals I'm not catching.
Your occupation's writing and you pursue to write the front page, so basically you're just stupid like the young age,
And one day... i'll come a-cross this idiot n crucify that dumb face, then put this killeR in a depressed suicidal-jump phase,
LOL at changing a killer to a suicidal person. BUT, i dont really understand the first line. How does one crusify a dumb face by the way?
It's clear his bars are nothing nice, thats why he joined a crew, now he can be part of something tight..,
I'll 'shoot blanks', cause you'll still get raped in this battle till your heart is pumping white!
OK, first of thanks for the crew admiration. I'll be honest, i have no idea what you mean by "pumping white"? Other than the personal and minor insult with it, i dont really see much in this bar.
You're as retarded as you're bright,lol seriously.. keeping all your lyrics on file just in case of 'targets' that'll bite..?
When obviously any artist on the site that's smart enough in life wouldn't harvest half the likes of the garbage that you write!
Maaaan, the fucking rhyme scheme in the last line is dope as shit. But other than that... I dont get it. Seems like you started really good, but slowly came softer and softer. Freestyling can sometimes make this happen... just saying.



Cory:

He says 8 bars, so w/ his stretched shit that's 20 lines worth, Copycat did Scott teach that?
I ain't a fucking rapper but I'm being heard "On A Major Scale" with how I just "Dropped E FLAT!"
LOL, i like the piano reference, and at the same time dropping Evo, but isnt this a flip? He said you claim you're not a rapper, you reference it, and you talk about his stretched bars... I can see the stretched bars thing if he had a lot of recent battles, but its been a grip, so for you to reference his bar legnth, it'd be something current, like the battle verse above....
Ya forced shit is "So-Nadda" so watch me "Trump-it", then start chucking off that fucking loss
Cuz thanks to "Evolution Being Fake" I lost to Jesus... That's what I call being "Double Crossed"
I do like the wordplay off the sonata, trumpit... but i dont really get the rest of the punch. Kinda reminds me of his few bars.?
I don't care if Jehovah witnesses it, I'll leave the door bloody & the floor muddy
Peel back banana clips while Evolution's hanging in front of his crib ... PORCH MONKEY!!!
lol at the porch monkey, but im pretty sure he isnt black lol. The jeohova line is pretty cool, i hope mine dont leave my door like that. Banana clip>monkey, ok.
Yeah I killed your confidence, call it a "drive bye", listen Geek cuz this is heat
It's no mystery you suck, "Your Evolution" as n' emcee is bullshit & this is the "Missing Link"
I liked this one, the wording wasnt as great as it could be, but saying you have the element in your skills that his evolution has lacked is pretty dope man.
I hope the voters here come w/ an open ear for a change, I hope they hear that you're lame
Otherwise for you the coast is clear, cuz ya fake ass flow is more "Smoke & Mirrors" than ya "Fake Ass Name"
(Ekoms) Real talk.
I honestly am having difficulties getting this... I lost the flow a lot here as well.
*I suggest you learn them & stop relying on forced multies, you're literally a "Fake Rap Reference"
I can't tell if you talking bout ya half-ass delivery or ya family's christmas tree when you said... "I-Lack-Presence..."
lol, this is indeed funny, but The presents/presence is rather ehh... I also expected some better multies after you called his out for being gay.
Hit ya sis in her Dodge Neon, Evo got a "Niece-On", by now it's in an orphanage I bet
Then I skipped court & jumped Evo, drove the lane to Illinois, pulled out my balls & SLAMMED JOURDAN ON THE NET!!!"
Lol about the ex reference, and i can only assume you were saying nissan/neice, so thats cool. The nasketball play with her name is cool too. No flow though
Your EX-STINKED, get it?, I didn' take her out I ate her out, so pussy you ain't helping keep down the hurl
I hope this "L You Have Now" "Brings You Down To Earth" cuz it was just "SEEN ROUND THE WORLD!!!"
I dont get it again... But i will also admit I am unable to see Evo's Avy. One way or the other, this verse is pretty good, but i guess I've seen you drop a lot better.



All in all,
I think -Multies- was Evo hands down
-Punches- i'd say cory by a tad bit, he seemed to come from more angles
-personals-... wasnt a fan of the years of reference, but Evo
-flow- both you guys write hella long. It was harder to find it in corys though and easier in Evo's because of the multies.
-Wordplay- Maaaan, ive been voting for like an hour now, the only memorable ones came from cory. I still cant get over the E flat line. lol.

So all in all, again, MVGT Evolution.

[Ambiguous Realm]

lol the break downs made laugh on both parts

also my outro refers to his profile holding all his writing pieces like a portfolio, its all good though i didn't think expos were needed for everything

and what rellik said in his outro he was referring to my avatar which i just realized is gone somehow so is his, i guess it was due to the site? anyways the L in my avatar's name went around pangea(the world) i'll upload it back up in a minute to clarify that, appreciate the time u took to break this down though



4-3 rellik leads, (and i didn't count remain's vote, i wasn't going to count joe or xtc's either since it was so short but didn't wanna hear complaining)

if u feel this is swaying in any way you're welcome to say something.. just calling as i see it


anyways was expecting panda to vote the other way, so still uppin for this battle, post a link to your battles needing votes along with your vote.. just try to add more than 3 categories or a single sentence if u can..i don't want to see a quick reply just so i can go vote in yours...

[M33Kish]

Evo
Victory must weigh a ton, that's why you can barely pull a win...
You're a disease of mine i cured, & i'll never CARRY YOU AGAIN!! *
I can see the personal but the punch wasnt all that great

You're probably still looking for punchlines, like "where's the beverages?"
Compared to parentage, you let down more partners than affairs in marriages, **
this was better but the punch would be better if the setup was more relevent

I'd beat the snot out of u but it'd be a waste of mucus, from Rugged to Rellik, i lost track of all the names you lose with, ***
against me.. it's simple i win, that's what a basic rule is, Mr. "I AM NOT A RAPPER" just because you've never faced the MUSIC! ****
HAHAHAHA thats the kill switch

so u show a "little late"? whoa..a skillful trait, but no matter how much of a burden you are..you're always below the middleweights!
and fuck what this Skittled face kid'll say!, cuz a quick mistake..will get this sinful gay to sit n wait by the phone until his 'mixed signal' fades!
inner multies were off the hook

this drug addicted sharpie-eater party creature probably zones out to his Ed Hardy sneakers while sparking ether,
in shame he got a new team, a new name, that goes to show your broke ass is always 'making change' like parking meters!
lol good shit

Your occupation's writing and you pursue to write the front page, so basically you're just stupid like the young age,
And one day... i'll come a-cross this idiot n crucify that dumb face, then put this killeR in a depressed suicidal-jump phase,
Lol nice nameflip and punch

It's clear his bars are nothing nice, thats why he joined a crew, now he can be part of something tight..,
I'll 'shoot blanks', cause you'll still get raped in this battle till your heart is pumping white!
this bar was nothing special imo

You're as retarded as you're bright,lol seriously.. keeping all your lyrics on file just in case of 'targets' that'll bite..?
When obviously any artist on the site that's smart enough in life wouldn't harvest half the likes of the garbage that you write!
lol good finish

Rellik
He says 8 bars, so w/ his stretched shit that's 20 lines worth, Copycat did Scott teach that?
I ain't a fucking rapper but I'm being heard "On A Major Scale" with how I just "Dropped E FLAT!"
Nice wordplay and punch connected well

Ya forced shit is "So-Nadda" so watch me "Trump-it", then start chucking off that fucking loss
Cuz thanks to "Evolution Being Fake" I lost to Jesus... That's what I call being "Double Crossed"
lol personal hit good

(So now I'm agnostic)

I don't care if Jehovah witnesses it, I'll leave the door bloody & the floor muddy
Peel back banana clips while Evolution's hanging in front of his crib ... PORCH MONKEY!!!
punch was ok kinda unversal, unless im missing something.

Yeah I killed your confidence, call it a "drive bye", listen Geek cuz this is heat
It's no mystery you suck, "Your Evolution" as n' emcee is bullshit & this is the "Missing Link"
hmmmm, i kinda get it

I'm going ape shit on Evolution!!!

I hope the voters here come w/ an open ear for a change, I hope they hear that you're lame
Otherwise for you the coast is clear, cuz ya fake ass flow is more "Smoke & Mirrors" than ya "Fake Ass Name"
(Ekoms) Real talk.
lol this was fire

Double Entendre's are nothing..

*I suggest you learn them & stop relying on forced multies, you're literally a "Fake Rap Reference"
I can't tell if you talking bout ya half-ass delivery or ya family's christmas tree when you said... "I-Lack-Presence..."
lol another good one

Hit ya sis in her Dodge Neon, Evo got a "Niece-On", by now it's in an orphanage I bet
Then I skipped court & jumped Evo, drove the lane to Illinois, pulled out my balls & SLAMMED JOURDAN ON THE NET!!!"
not all bad

(I met Jourdan on E-Harmony, ironic as fuck huh?)

Your EX-STINKED, get it?, I didn' take her out I ate her out, so pussy you ain't helping keep down the hurl
I hope this "L You Have Now" "Brings You Down To Earth" cuz it was just "SEEN ROUND THE WORLD!!!"
ok closer

All in all my vote goes to rellik, evo had the nicer flow with all the multies but his punches werent as great.

[Ambiguous Realm]

5-3 rellik wins, good job ho

-records updated and battle closed-