My Stance Pt.1

[Mac]

It's Known That I Fold-And-Handel-Emcees
When I Unload-And-Dismantel-They-Team
Not Even Ghost Can Hold-A-Candel-To-Me
So When You Boast-An-You-Channel-At-Me
You Better Hope-You-Can-Stand-Next-To-Me
On This Rap Shit Cuz I've Mastered-The-Art
I'm Blastin-A-Dart Sendin You Wack Rappers
Back-In-The-Dark I'm Attackin-With-Bars
Extractin-They-Heart Straight Rip These Faggot-Apart
With Passion-An-Heart I'll Leave Ya Ass-At-The-Start
A Flint's The Only Way You Faggots-Will-Spark

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[-TraMaTiK-]

I've Mastered-The-Art
I'm Blastin-A-Dart Sendin You Wack Rappers
Back-In-The-Dark

fav part^^...overall decent drop..nothin extraordinary but it was solid..had the usual multis n stuff..nice drop..maybe u shud extent that..idk nice drop doe -1-

[16 Micz]

dope shit i liked the multis...i love these short drops cause i can easily leave feedback but nice piece, lol and the title i thought u would be dissin someone but i guess not,

[Mac]

Lol Nah, I Thought About It, Just Doin Some Funny Shit an Diss Everybody Just For The Fun Of It. But Thanks Man. You Too Tramatik, Thanks For Feed.

[complexity]

Yah. Pretty nice. You are good at keeping your schemes consistent. Which you did in this flow. And made it enjoyable to read. To avoid the fact it had no substance. 7.8/10 for a short-story

[Haz]

You Flowed Nice wit Tha Multis i Was Feelin it
Fav Line : When I Unload-And-Dismantel-They-Team Not Even Ghost Can Hold-A-Candel-To-Me

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

Tha Multies Was Nice Up in This ..
i Thought Some Of Them Was Forced Though ..
& it Seemed Like U Was Grabbin` Words Out Tha air Jus to Rhyme Wit `em ..
But all in all ..
it Was a Solid Verse Overall ..

[Mac]

Eh, Wasn't Forced, Or Grabbing Words Out Of Thin Air. Shit Was Off The Top, That's Why There Was Multies Consistently, I Was Just Rhyming An Trying To Keep Topic. Thanks For The Feed Though.

[|.R.SON.aLL.|]

Ooohh ..
aiight .. i Feel U Now ..