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The Way Life Is (Mac Ft. Domino)

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http://illestlyrics.com/board/multie-king-vt3041.html
http://illestlyrics.com/board/day-dreamin-vt3141.html

With death arrivin an bodies Multi-Plyin,
You gotta resort to guns like It's All-Reliance,
Got ya wrist contorted an Forced-to-Buy-Em'
An now a days it's hard not to Resort-To-Violence,
So Folks Turn to nine to five'n as a Retort-To-Find-Em'
With the Morgue-Dividing this course is Horrifyin,
As ya Forced to Enforce-the-Iron but Of Course,
There's a Force like The Star Wars to Deny-Em'
But I guess in disputes it's easier to pull a Nine-Out,
An it's crazy how you can lose ya life over a Rhyme-Now,
But.... I Spose That's Just The Way Life Goes,
At any minute any second ya Life just Might Fold//

Everybody Hates Bitches, But Bitches-Are-All-Around ..||
Sometimes it Takes Just a Bump Then, Stitches-Across-ur-Mouth ..||
Sometimes Not Even That, We Come From a Past-Of-Bloodthirst ..||
Humans Evolved is Some Ways, But We're Still a Pack-Of-Vultures ..||
a City-Kid Surrounded By The Biggest idiots, But Happy-With-Life ..||
i Used To Carry-My-Knife Always Up To Attack-When-it's-Right ..||
Annoying When u Come Across The Dull Type Like 'My Life-is-Shit' ..||
Do Somethin About it, Lighten-it And Fight-The-Shit ..||
i Used 2 Walk With Chips On My Shoulder And a Tightened-Fist ..||
Someone Ever Did Me Harm id Then Lose it And Strike-And-Hit ..||
Now its Pointless, Regardless Of My Surroundings, ill Never Sink-in-Em ..||
Livin-in Violence is Everywhere, The Strongest Never Give-it-in And Live-in-Sin ..||
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Post by Haz »

Hott Shiit Mac N Domino ...
Multis Were Strong From Both
Stayed On The Same Kind Of Concept i Felt it
Good Shit 8/10
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Post by precise »

dope, very good for sure, and short enuff that i didnt lose interest like i usually do with collabs lol. nice consistent multies, good topic n story carried through it, good drop
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

This shit was Hot, both of you stayed on topic wit each others verses, nice shit yall...
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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thanks folks
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Uppin.......
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Post by Big Money$$ »

that shit was nice ya'll are some nice rappers
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Post by B-Bear »

jsut wondering who wrote which verse?


anyway.. not important really, just curious! good flow and vocab.. kept yaself well on topic.. it's tight drop fellas!


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i Used 2 Walk With Chips On My Shoulder And a Tightened-Fist ..||
Someone Ever Did Me Harm id Then Lose it And Strike-And-Hit ..||

So Folks Turn to nine to five'n as a Retort-To-Find-Em'
With the Morgue-Dividing this course is Horrifyin,
As ya Forced to Enforce-the-Iron but Of Course,
There's a Force like The Star Wars to Deny-Em'
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Post by ky-ill »

Good work guys nice to see youve been improving
8/10 who ever wrote the first verse nice rhyme scheme
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turn back the hands-of-time one of the plans-of-mine and the need to scam-a-dime/
learn that ill leave sand-in-ya-spine
from the hour-glass your losing
power-fast the tower-crash as I scan-the-sign/
but like scarface Im still standing-fine/
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Post by Momeijah »

Thanks For The Feed Every1. And Just For The Ppl Wondering. 1st Verse = Mac. Second = Me.
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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Post by Mac »

Yeah Thanks For The Feed Back Folks. Much Appreciated.
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