Just A Thought

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Wed Jan 17, 2007 1:21 am

Just a Thought.. the short part.. lol

searchin for conclusions of your odd illusions
my contributions will leave u with solutions
cause u're escaping from a world of perplexity
struggle ya hardest, but never reach complexity
got an axe in me, that really tear me up inside
as i'm subsiding, unable to ride this wave any longer
the ancient ferry takes me to the kingdom of death
i'll be locked in my corpse, gotta enjoy my last breath

Link:

http://illestlyrics.com/board/mac-u-rea ... t3081.html

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Wed Jan 17, 2007 1:34 am

i'll be locked in my corpse, gotta enjoy my last breath
^^^ Datz a Deep Line .. If You Try n Come Up Wit More Typa Deep Stuff Like That n Had it All in One Solid Verse i Think it would Have Alotta Potential Man lol Your Emotions On point .. Good Shit i enjoyed Diz Lil Read Keep doin U `1

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Wed Jan 17, 2007 2:36 am

yeah this was a nice short verse, its got me wantin to read more man.

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:09 am

yeah.. like i said, this was the short part..

thanks ghost.. appreicate feedback, u too hazard!

precise · Post by **precise** » Thu Jan 18, 2007 3:19 am

good to see your still droppin here b-bear

youre definately improving on your rhymes, and youre topic is deeper than usual, which is good, probably draws the rhymeskill outa you.

anyways keep at it, elevate

peace

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Thu Jan 18, 2007 8:19 am

Good Shit Man, I Agree With Precise It Got Me Wanna Read More. Over All It Was Pretty Dope, You Fell Off On One Line Wich Aint Bad So Props Man You're Definately Gettin Better Like Precise Mentioned. Keep DRoppin Man.

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Fri Jan 19, 2007 5:01 am

thanks.. appreciate feedback fellas!! haha.. i'm still droppin, just not so often.. don't post everything i write when I'm done wit it.. like to mix, and leave it for a while, then to look over it later and maybe exchange certain parts of it.. that's really why i aint droppin so often..

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Fri Jan 19, 2007 7:08 am

Most Of What I Drop Is Off The Top For The Most Part. I Don't Hardly Drop All My Writtens Either. So I Feel You.

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Fri Jan 19, 2007 9:10 am

it`s Short as Hell ..
But it`s Koo` i Guess ..
Was This a Keystyle ??..
Or Written ??..

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Sat Jan 20, 2007 1:36 am

it's a very short part of a written.. like i said earlier, wanna look over the verse one more time before posting it, so it'll soon be here..

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Sat Jan 20, 2007 3:30 am

i see your point about not droppin all the time, or at least not postin every written, sometimes it aint worth the time to post everything, cuz you wont get the feed back that you want, but like i said earlier you should finish this piece wit the feed that you got from hazard and post it again.

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Sun Jan 21, 2007 10:26 am

No Doubt ^^

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