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Theories of Distruction Part I

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Most Rhymes are Non-Productive like Stressful Infertility,
Personally, I see no potential in the humans Mental Versatility,
Verbally, I Murder Willingly gainin Depth Thru Personality,
I Hurt MC's wit Pencils Purposely, that Lead to a Cursed Agility,
Humanity and its Stenciled Durability cant handle Tension bein Pulled Vertically,
Inspect the Census Thoroughly, I advance thru Telekenetic Maturity,
We've been Accustomed to Fall, by believing in Justice by Law,
So Much to Resolve, so we Stumble to Solve,
The theory of life before it Ups and Evolves,
Implodes to Dust & Dissolves, and results in a Thrust that Involves.
The Revolutions of Planets around the Suns Gravitational Pull in Proportion,
To the Evolution of Masses & the Nuances Performance accordin to the Moons of Extortions,
And Potions in Portions to Ruin the Purest Emotions of life Thru an Abortion,
Supportin the Motions, twists and bends of reality like the Moves of Contortion,
Erase the Blessins and Count the Losses, the Earths HeartBeat is the Sound of Exhaustion,
Use Profound Precaution! Soon you'll see earthquakes in the Grounds under Boston,
Snow Storms in Southern Cities Surroundin a Town called Austin,
Oceans evaporatin, mountains collapsing, desert land is freezing and its not Far from Repulsive…….


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daamn.. that shit was on fire.. MAD vocab man! one of the best pieces i've seen from u.. mad props! there was some lines that made too much sense.. lol.. really enjoyed reading it..keep droppin
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Well Im glad you enjoyed, i enjoyed writin this piece, it felt like I was releasin the truth, a warnin to all. The line jus came out, it was almost like i was posessed or somethin...jk lol. but i appreciate the feed back b-bear.. big ups
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by the way b-bear what did you mean by some lines made to much sense. is that a bad or good thing for you?
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UPPIN
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lol about a word or two i've never heard before.. i didn't like the ending too much but overall it was hot, nice use of vocab and multis
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Post by Mac »

Nice Shit Man, I Agree With EkomS, You Feel Off At The End. But Aside Of That....

Over All: Vocab Was Dope, Multies On Point, Structure Was Deceant, Other Then The Ending It Was Sick Man.

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" Hurt MC's wit Pencils Purposely, that Lead to a Cursed Agility,
Humanity and its Stenciled Durability cant handle Tension bein Pulled Vertically, "

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx for the feed back, not to clear on the un-heard words or why the endin was off. maybe you could clarify that for me.......
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Nice Man .. i Liked How You Extended Your Vocab
Ya Multis Was On Point .. i Think it Was Pretty Good All Thru But Dats My Opinion ..
Fav Lines : To the Evolution of Masses & the Nuances Performance accordin to the Moons of Extortions,
And Potions in Portions to Ruin the Purest Emotions of life Thru an Abortion,
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Post by Mac »

I Was Refurring To The Last Line Myself...

Snow Storms in Southern Cities Surroundin a Town called Austin,
Oceans evaporatin, mountains collapsing, desert land is freezing and its not Far from Repulsive…….

Too Me ^^ You Fell Off There. Shit Was Still Sick Though.
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aigh thanx for the clarification of the subject at hand homie!!!! check out part II
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

it wasn't exactly off... but i wasn't feeling the use of city names and all that..the words i never seen before were census and nuances, im not sure if nuances is a word or a name.. but maybe i'll look it up sometime
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We've been Accustomed to Fall, by believing in Justice by Law,
So Much to Resolve, so we Stumble to Solve,
The theory of life before it Ups and Evolves,
Implodes to Dust & Dissolves, and results in a Thrust that Involves.
Fav Part^
Yah its a Good Read When i Skim Thru Really Just Reading The Rhymes But When i Slow Down n Read it Well its a Fuckin Dope Piece Overall. Multis Were There The Whole Way Thru And interesting imagery Aswell.
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thanx man, appreciate the feed yall, nuance is a subtle change/difference in meanin, feelin, tone or color....
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Post by Haz »

Snow Storms in Southern Cities Surroundin a Town called Austin,
Oceans evaporatin, mountains collapsing, desert land is freezing and its not Far from Repulsive…….

HOW'D He FALL OFF DERE ^^^^?? lol.. Dat Wuz
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