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Audible Thought
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The IV

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http://snd.sc/oV4CAv

Any constructive criticism is appreciated!
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hmm this not bad..real kick back vibe...

production is pretty good imo..you got a kinda commonish way about ya raps...

the Hooks pretty good imo..maybe a lil heavy on the way if anything ..imo....

all in all this is cool got ya own vibe here i can digg it dude..1
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thanks bro
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