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cata- Losin'My'Religion

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[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/jslymm34/let-me-d ... -high-2012[/soundcloud]


some real shit doh.
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Post by Loon E Lou »

daaaamn man. not gonna lie this was pretty dope. kinda go off on some mystikal type flow. hella energy man. the beat was nice and relaxed, and you came hyped. i like the mixture on it. damn man you have mad energy, im typin this while listenin. jus when i think you cant get more energetic, you come even more hyped. haha. it really builds up. havent heard anything like this in a pretty long time. i say you get on more melodic beats to really break up your hooks and verses, so it can make the song a little more interesting. just an opinion.
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thanks brah, the insight.
that beat and rhyme just came about and i ran with it..

thax again.
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Post by jayzon_black »

I'm catching ya drops, you got talent. Definitely. This one sounds like it was recorded kinda hot, almost clipping in a couple spots, but the drop itself was nice.
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I agree with Loon E. Lou. I like the persona you used - a very angry agnostic, I don't know that much about audios but I just feel that the instrumental wasn't the best choice, other than that, this was really good..
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Post by ScottJames »

sounds constipated
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Post by TreTru »

hahaha..wow uhhm yeah you went in wayy hott in this one...uhmm maybe step back from the mic or turn down ya input volume...sorry it made it hard for me to continue listening..

i think the lyrics are decent and the concept is sik..imo..

uhhm yeahthe beat seems real laid back..and soft..but this could probably be a good track dog...1
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