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Deciple
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I Will Promise

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This is my fastest track to date.. Enjoy..

http://soundcloud.com/deciple/i-will-promise

Many Gods in this world but theres only 1 living
Theres only one that forgives you when you fall from believing
His merceful loving and his promising covets
The Lord of All Lord and my Father beloved above

From my first lyircs to my last track
You Got me into Rap now im gonna go and give it back
You saved my life now im gonna give you everything
And This I Promise Lord And This I Promise Lord

Never really thought this world would get so bad
Everybody looking around asking why
when we gonna die its just a matter of time
but you cant live in fear under all the cried tears
for the ones that are lost and you didnt say goodbye too
Life is too short but you gotta go and make it through
cant lose the focus on the goals you notice and the
devil gonna temp us but he know he cant hold us
Its the devils playground but i wont lay down
for the sucka trying to kill me whats he gonna say now
Its hard to breath with all the poverty and
the family trying go and steal from me
Whats the world coming to you can walk outside
2 steps off your porch and you might as well die
so you realize that life aint worth a try
So you wanna give it up and never ever look back
But Hold Up, Gotta take a sec now
Theres No Love, On what you trynna do
All you want is happiness but you cant find it
you been around the happiness but you been blinded
with the crowd of all the liars and the fleshly desires
you hide behind the smiles but you always in denial
on what you really want and who you really are
wanna change the world, start first, on your back yard

([Bridge])
Many Gods in this world but theres only 1 living
Theres only one that forgives you when you fall from believing
His merceful loving and his promising covets
The Lord of All Lord and my Father beloved above

From my first lyircs to my last track
You Got me into Rap now im gonna go and give it back
You saved my life now im gonna give you everything
And This I Promise Lord And This I Promise Lord

Never returning the favor Loving Redeemer The Savior
Gave his life upon the cross commit to the faith and he'll save ya
He gave you before dont ignore the door that he opened for you
So be assured what your doing for the Lord is the Truth

Are you really saved, are you fully committed
Do you want his love have you ask to recieve it
Are you playing christian Are you wearing a mask
Have you fully let go, Are you drowning in the past
so lets turn now to 2 timothy 3
through all the persucusions he will come and resue me
Indeed to all those who want to live a godly life
Wisdom in salvation thur the faith in Jesus Christ
The fear of the Lord is the beginning of knowledge
For the Lord gives wisdom and he's never decievin
The devil put you on the list for over time job
Now that your walking with God, Its gonna be hard
no matter where you are no matter what the situation
you can always turn to God and fill the void that you are missin
and you never mistaking by taking the path that he making
breaking and aiding a lonely heart FOR WHAT BREAKS YOURS

([Bridge])
Many Gods in this world but theres only 1 living
Theres only one that forgives you when you fall from believing
His merceful loving and his promising covets
The Lord of All Lord and my Father beloved above

From my first lyircs to my last track
You Got me into Rap now im gonna go and give it back
You saved my life now im gonna give you everything
And This I Promise Lord And This I Promise Lord
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: I Will Promise

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Yeah i agree wit thaone, u shouldnt try too hard with the fast rap, while the message was dope i think the fast rap brought the track down. Keep practicin the fast rap tho, im trying to do it myself and i know how hard it is lol. You should do tongue twisters everyday and put more inner rhymes and multi's. And syllable count is even more important with fast rap.


Overall keep at it my dude, and welcome back havent seen you in a bit
"Until we're all free fuck the world pass the weed, life ain't what it seems y'all we chasin fantasies"-Lastchild [R.I.P]
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Re: I Will Promise

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wow man...i alwayz look forward to your drops bro...
cant knock on ya concept always posotive good stuff man..
quality is good as usual...

The flo was aight but the pronounciation was bad bro..

if your gonna spit quik like that your gonna have to watch
your lyrics..the syllable count was pretty good on most of ya lines..but sayin certain words back to back are harder than others..just some advice...hope it werks out for ya homey...
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Re: I Will Promise

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wierd it doesnt show my post^^^
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Re: I Will Promise

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haha Thanks guys.. this was for some reason a track i did after i recorded 11 others before.. i think i was tired.. i will for sure redo this one.. plus it was written in like 30 min and i havent practiced it enough. but i will for sure take what i got here and apply it to this track and future ones...
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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