My Stance Pt.3

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Sun Jan 21, 2007 6:06 pm

You've never seen Stats-Nicer they call me The-Mac-Meister,
A iLL-Rap-Sniper, Recyclin a line from a iLL-Rap-Cypher//
To Transform-It to Inform Kids I'm More Fit to Re-Form-Spits,
To make More-Sense Then Whore That Originally Formed-It//
See I Say-Shit an Make-It hard to Relate-Wit half the shit I May-Spit,
Like Hazard with A-Lisp mixed with a little bit of The Matrix//
An that's some No Hate-Shit Cause C'mon let's Face-It,
On Some Base-Shit That's my home boy and I'd never Disgrace-It//
Except for the Days Spent in the dark like a Basement,
Practicin Un Safe-Sex fuckin his bitch with out Latex//
An of course you just May-Guess what it was that Came-Next,
She sucked me off till i Sprayed-Jizz, turned around kissin hazard with the Same-Lips//

Lmao, Just Fuckin Around..

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Momeijah · Post by **Momeijah** » Sun Jan 21, 2007 6:11 pm

Lmao. Nice Multis All The Way Thru, Punches Were Off The Hook Son. Keep Droppin More Like This. Key Lines For Me Were

Except for the Days Spent in the dark like a Basement,
Practicin Un Safe-Sex fuckin his bitch with out Latex//
An of course you just May-Guess what it was that Came-Next,
She sucked my off till i Sprayed-Jizz, turned around kissin hazard with the Same-Lips//

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Sun Jan 21, 2007 6:17 pm

Lol Thanks Man.

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:13 am

uppinn

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:20 am

An of course you just May-Guess what it was that Came-Next,
She sucked my off till i Sprayed-Jizz, turned around kissin hazard with the Same-Lips//

thats just nasty, but super funny....did i mention that was nasty?

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 4:26 am

The first line was weak, but every line after that was hott shit, multies were on point all the way thru. did really understand this lline though:
To make More-Sense Then Whore That Originally Formed-It//

but other than that line and the intro this verse was one of the better written ones ive seen from you, big ups kid keep doin yuh thing MAC MIESTER....lol

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 5:06 am

To make More-Sense Then Whore That Originally Formed-It//

^^ .. i ain`t Really Get That Shit ..
Tha`s Wat i Meant By Juss Grabbin` Words Out Tha air & Shit ..

She sucked me off till i Sprayed-Jizz, turned around kissin hazard with the Same-Lips//

^^ .. Lmfao .. is That Beef i Smell Cookin` ??..

Overall - Solid Piece .. Nothin` More .. Nothin` Less ..
Keep Droppin` Fam .. U Get Better Everytime U Drop Sumptin` ..

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 6:05 am

I Wasn't Grabbing, I Ment Then The Whore Originally Wrote It. "Formed It, Wrote It" Same Shit..Specially When I'm Talkin About Transforming. But Word. Thanks For The Feed.

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:02 pm

Uppin For A couple More Atleast?

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:06 pm

Ooohh .. Well That Coulda Been Worded Better ..

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:10 pm

Uh Everything Could Always Be Worded Better, But I Got It... Thanks.

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:18 pm

Nice Mac .. U Came Wit Multis Punches My Turn ..

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 2:24 pm

Lol Good Shit Man

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Tue Jan 23, 2007 5:45 am

Spose Thats It, Thanks For The Feed Back Folks.

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