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i Stand Here Vol. 2

Post by Momeijah »

Ain't Dropped For a While, i Got Some Writers Block So This Was Really 2 Refresh Myself

Warmin Up With Creative Killin...

it's Like ur Steppin On a Rabbit's Foot, Cuz u Guys Are Pressin-ur-Luck ..||
im a Professional-Yup, u Ain't Testin-Me-Punk u Can Take a Rest-in-The-Trunk ..||
This Ain't a Gangsta Rap i Won't-Shoot-You, Fuck The Wessons-n-Pumps ..||
i'm Just Teachin-a-Lesson, Keepin-u-Guessin To When i Severe-ur-Lungs ..||
While They're Still-in-u And Slit ur Throat So Fast ur Blood is Spillin-Blue ..||
Stick a Quill-in-You, Cuz ur So Fuckin Wack at Rappin The Pen is Killin-YOU ..||

Mettas?...

So Steer-Me-Clear And Just Lock-The Door, Like ur Wheelin Down Compton's-Roads ..||
Not Even-Beavers Could Block-This-Flow, Domino's Always Can 'Drop-The-Dough'..||
These Rappers Ain't 'Tight' Like a Fat-Man's-Belt-Loose..||
And Couldn't Make a Wordplay With Alphabet-Soup ..||
Do Drop it, While ur at it, Let The Pen-Fall-With-it ..||
Cuz The Only Bars You'd Ever Ride Are Metal-Rivets ..||

And Some...

i Send Opposers Reeling-With-2-Fists While Screaming-ur-Useless ..||
'ill Rappers' Talkin Like They're The Best, Well ur Still Needing-2-Prove-This ..||
i See-Past These Weak-Bastards Thinkin Anyone's Feelin-Their-Bullshit ..||
Who u Foolin? Amusing They Still Think They're Good When They're Losin ..||
Spittin The Same-Old-Shit, And i Could Kill u But ill Save-All-Spits ..||
Cuz What's The Point Of 'Takin ur Life' When it Ain't-Worth-Shit ..||

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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Some Of Tha Multies Were Forced to Me ..
Tha Flow Was a Lil Choppy ..
U Was a Lil Rusty On This Piece ..
BUT .. U Still Managed to Make it Nice ..
Tha Ceativity Was Tha Best Part ..
IMO .. `cus Tha`s One Of Mah Favorite Cats ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Mac »

I've Seen A Lot Better From You, So Clearly You've Had Writers Block. Some Lines Was Played Out Like That "Slit ur Throat So Fast ur Blood is Spillin-Blue" Multies Was Alright, I Didn't See Many Forced Ones imo, Over All Though It Was Nice, You Definately Can Do A Lot Better Though. Writers Block Is A Bitch Though So I Feel You. Keep Droppin Though Homie.
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Post by Subsist »

Write some verses without multies im sure thatll freshen you up.
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Post by 16 Micz »

explain to me why ur on my nuts...with this title seriously, first mac, then hazard, then ghost, now domaho..eh ill probably read it a lil later..
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Post by Haz »

Mine Was A Joke So Be Eazi ... Nice Domino ..
Multis Was Good Metaphors .. it Was Creative
Keep Droppin... i Liked it Personally
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Post by Momeijah »

Yah, Writer's Block Really Does Suck Lol. Sometimes u Get That Feelin u Can Write For Days...Sometimes u Don't Lol. Thanks For The Feed Ppl And Rust is Currently Being Shook Off. :D Lol
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