blake downs -vs- comeback kid (CBK wins KO)

[Blake Downs]

6 bars house rules
due:24 hours,
good luck kid

[Blake Downs]

hes a dumb faggit,his mom's already yelling ComeBack Kid!
what a bitch,that killah punished kid,i let him live,this is punishment
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/k-kil ... 24424.html
his lines need modified,when kid rhymes they say is that an honest try?
foreal guys,we left his ancestors mummified,im schooling kid everyday like im bill nye
i got real nines,you lose so much we dont even have to really try
assault riffles,rocket launchers,monsters,and fried chicken youll be lucky if you survive
you weak rookie,if you think your getting this win
your full of shit,i treat you like how toddlers treat cookies
its unique,lines surrond you like the sound proof
booths,there you dont belong,you try to impress,we all know its wrong
you tried to rhyme,they had to hide,
you see k.o's more than you see the light,this just proves im right

[CBK]

unexpected...

you throw punches like an elephant, you no flow hobo,
no homo bro,
your bars are more irrelevant than a yoko ono promo solo show,
an even less amusing,
your a fiend i grieve for your text abusing,
im in fact a vet at losing, adapt, adept at moving,very human
you can't battle rap faggit stick to using the net for grooming underage secondary students.
your style is weak an sloppy you could cheat an copy
but even with someone else's bars blakes never again beating on me.
i've elevated he's been here years stagnating,im past waiting
uneducated blake's mad statements could even test jesus's dads patience
to say he's a fags blatant, i'll leave this lad gaping
hit me up down syndrome next time you feel like an ass raping.

[Loon E Lou]

well well well.


pretty eeh battle.

seemed like a universal punch battle with the occasional name drop.

blake-you tried to use some nameplay, but wasnt very effective. your rhymes jus seemed simple as hell. no real hit to the punches or multies. jus kinda bland.

cbk- now, although you didnt come very direct either, your multies were on point. shit flowed nice. your structure was way better too.

all in all this wasnt a very enjoyable battle, but, cbk did come with a more enjoyable verse so........


mvgt comeback kid

[Enlightend]

I have to agree with loon... overall a very BLAH battle nothing stood out... but I feel like cbk edged it with an ok rhyme scheme... neither of you really used any punches but Blake's was all over the place... no real structure to speak of....

So mvgt.... CBK

[CBK]

2 nil.. CBK uppin

[Enders]

Ok, well, all in all, still seems like Blake is in a downward spiral, and writing terribly. Bill Nye? C'mon man, what happened to the dude that got 29 wins? Anyhow, you werent very impressive, and the rhyme scheme seemed dumbed down for what you usually try and present. Not trying maybe? Could this be a classic case of thinking you have it in the bag and short sell some?

CBK, not bad man, structure is coming together better, but your still rather falling short. You should be able to pull off rhyme schemes into a perfect flow, but syllable count would help you a lot. Im no pro by far, but i know presentation is key in many things, and if it looks like it flows, itll flow. So try and syllable match as much as possible, it will also increase the use of doubles and multies. Your punches are coming along, but not too impressive, yet. Again, im no pro, just my opinion.

After reading both, MVGT CBK. Neither had too much to say, but the rhyme scheme was a tad better, as well as attempted insults.


Good job ComeBack Kid

[Alvin]

CBK wins KO