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LadieHazard · Post by **LadieHazard** » Thu Jan 25, 2007 7:05 am

This emotion of Devotion Caused massive explosion/thru these vainz and im hopen will soon leave em choken/the fury im holding will soon be uproaring from these feelingz im storing /the vainz will soon pop with shots of leathal fluidz/ my conscience standing aside screamin shoot it just do it/as i sit still and my end is near everyone screamin but not a word i can hear/as i lean over to whispter 1 last thing in ur ear the light has grew dark as my endz finally here...

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Thu Jan 25, 2007 7:56 am

This emotion of Devotion Caused massive explosion
thru these vainz and im hopen will soon leave em choken

c how i did that? juz put that line directly under it..thas the 'structure' shit we talkin bout..lol i seen u did it in the other one which was cool..nice piece doe -1-

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Thu Jan 25, 2007 9:33 am

She Knows Tramatik .. I've Bin Tellin Ha How To
Do it .. So U Dont Gotta Worry bout Dat aiight ..

Babie Dis Was A Good Piece Your Brought Emotion
To it .. Your Rhyme Scheme Was Good i Didnt
See Anythin Really forced i Think it Flowed thru
Good All Togetha .. So Niiiice

Fire Ass Linez : This emotion of Devotion Caused massive explosion/thru these vainz and im hopen will soon leave em choken/the fury im holding will soon be uproaring from these feelingz im storing /the vainz will soon pop with shots of leathal fluidz/ my conscience standing aside screamin shoot it just do it/

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Thu Jan 25, 2007 10:09 am

juz given her feed u no but ye -1-

ThaBitchYouHate · Post by **ThaBitchYouHate** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 10:47 am

Dawna ma U know that wuz tight

LadieHazard · Post by **LadieHazard** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:08 am

Thankz Lil mamiiii

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:19 am

LOL^^ *Slapz LadieHazard

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:26 am

man hazard you really believe you're teachin her anything man you're wack she aughta be teachin you how to rap

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 12:12 pm

Word Im Teachin Ha Subsist .. Oh im Whack ???
LOL Comin From Someone Who Shaves His Legs
Righ ... Keep Workin Wid Ya Oil Man Cause Ur
Not Gettin "Hot Underground" Rap WIse ..

LadieHazard · Post by **LadieHazard** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 12:16 pm

Lmao hell nah n to be Real Sub he the one thas been teachin me ...

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 12:18 pm

Babie .. Teach Subsist How To Shave His Legs
Hes Big On Dat When Hiz People Be Comin OVa To Gang bang Him N He Often Cuts Parts Of Um ..
So U Gotta Betta Razor Or Any Advice Fa Da Fag?

LadieHazard · Post by **LadieHazard** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 12:22 pm

hmmm a betta razor maybe

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