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Ambiguous Realm
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

metaphoric flow: you should post your profile thing on illest
Ts0hG WriTeR: y?
metaphoric flow: its dope

so here's my profile.. could care less if u like it or not tho lol


These miracles-have-ya-listen, to spiritual-rap-collisions, of heros-who'll-grab-ya-visions,like The Lyrical-Apparition, now name someone who spit-or-wrote-that-tight, so i can slit-their-throat-at-night, never to be heard-or-seen, like a murder-scene.. no word-or-scream, EkomS to SmokE im silent-but-deadly, can't train me to kill.. i'm violent-already!, i'm livin in west-palm-beach, come find me i'll show u my left-arm's-reach, from upnorth chicago that's where they pushed-me-thru-knives, day and night rape..chi-town no pussies-survive, better have a suit-and-a-vest,bullet proof! so i can shoot-at-ya-chest,Me vs. this Reader.. its just U-and-the-BEST!

~EkomS[E.V.I.L.]~
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Post by drunken jesus »

kinda fell off after the aaaa rhyme

still pretty good though
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by precise »

that was tight, very entertaining, thats all i got to say about it

so i can shoot-at-ya-chest,Me vs. this Reader.. its just U-and-the-BEST!
^^^great ending
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Post by complexity »

this was really nice, you had a nice story. And the multi's were layed perfect, it did fall off a little towards the end
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