Just Bored w/ lots of time

[overkill]

this cats the one to give it to ya//
took ya rook wit a pawn and thats how i schooled ya//

yea thats right "word playa" i bomb u like pearl harbor//
and then peel ur wig off quick like an unlicensed barber//

this kidz definately crazy if he thinks hes got a chance//
only time he ever lifted heads was when he was watchin hiz plantz//

his asylum looks like a meat locker but your still full of insanity//
call me constantine how i turn this nigga over to christianity.

[Ambiguous Realm]

6/10 i liked the ending ... could be more complex and improve the flow a lil.. it was decent tho

[overkill]

Thanks, this ol dawg needs to catch up on alot of pratice.

[complexity]

yah it was alright, you obviously know what you are doing. Just need to get back into it. I liked the last line the best as well.

[drunken jesus]

barber line was cool, overall this was pretty simplistic though

pretty much what ekoms said just try to make your shit more complex and more interesting to read