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lol this was straight...it caught my attention...some funny lines in there..haha like that goin to prison one...keep it up man do wat u do
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Lmao Bwahaha Funny Man Real Nice..Homie
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Nice You Came Nice Wit Ya Multis .. i Liked ya Linez
lol U Can Relate To Um if U Smoke Dat Shit

Fav Linez : was just sniffin coke got "some-sort-of-a-head-ache"
im so blowed i wonder "what-kinda-sandwich-bread-make"
so much coke its like im "snowin-on-flows"
tha shits so icee it "froze-in-my-nose"
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

lol juz plain funny...tru tho good shit whole thign was hot ta me..-1-
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this was aight man, i liked it, it had its borin parts bein that it solong but your improvin wit every drop. so congrats on the elevation.....

big ups kid
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Spoof »

LOL that was a nice drop, and funny! It flows well, nice multies and nice story telling

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roll it up in a blunt put it in tha pipe and "smoke-a-bowl"
wait till tha shit hits ya lungs if ya "choke-ya-roll"

so much coke its like im "snowin-on-flows"
tha shits so icee it "froze-in-my-nose"

call me Mario cuz im "poppin-mush-rooms"
tha walls are drippin as i yell "stop-tha-rush-soon"!
lookin at my lines they start to look like some "sort-of-evasion"
i couldnt help it these shrooms "got-me-dazein"
tried to wash my hands and a dragon "came-out-tha-faucet"
i was lookin for tha salad even though "i-couldn't-toss-it"
started searchin for my mind thats when i "realised-i-lost-it"....
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Post by Akuma »

wow you my nigga on that blunt shit haha this is a good one .. im feel the rhyme sceme

i keep dottin my "T's-and-crossing-my-eyes" (the letter i)
walk in to McDonalds "can-i-get-that-super-sized"
no i dont want a big mac i was "searchin-for-cat"
only thing they said was sorry sir tha chinese can "help-ya-with-that"

rofl .. thats funny when you stoned
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Post by B-Bear »

yeeah.. definelty a nice drop homez.. good with em muties, although i felt u sorta forced em a few times, but shit doesn't matter that much .. the rest of the verse mad up for it so.. straihgt vocab, and funny as hell man.. a few hilarious lines..

no i dont want a big mac i was "searchin-for-cat"
only thing they said was sorry sir tha chinese can "help-ya-with-that"

call me Mario cuz im "poppin-mush-rooms"
tha walls are drippin as i yell "stop-tha-rush-soon"!
lookin at my lines they start to look like some "sort-of-evasion"
i couldnt help it these shrooms "got-me-dazein"
tried to wash my hands and a dragon "came-out-tha-faucet"
i was lookin for tha salad even though "i-couldn't-toss-it"
started searchin for my mind thats when i "realised-i-lost-it"..

that was a hot piece man.. the verse was just hot.. keep droppin
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