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16 Micz
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R.I.P Proof(Belated)

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i dont think its necessary for me to post a link...ive left plenty of feedback

1975 the Umbelical disconnected
clean baby born, life was unaffected

who knew in the future this child would be selected?
mother raised em well her job will be respected

through out the game our minds would be infected
aligned and redirected, this time its not expected

the crime is not neglected, but besides hes now arrested
but beyond mankind his kind is not rejected

after money, cars, girls and fame his life was unprotected
why? cause threw the blinds his mind was whats detected

life was what protected him, til the mic began projecting him
best friends sacrificed and threw the mic they ressurected him

they ask whyd he have to die no ones knows
i suppose jealously, or coincidence, dedicated his foes

New album about to drop and this was unsuspected
although his rhymes were deadly his fans were uninfected

sometimes a goof,spit hard in the booth
hard to accept the truth,but rest in peace Proof.



i wrote this a while ago but nobody wanted to collab on it so ill post it
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Post by Mac »

Damn Mics, This Shit Was Hot. Dope Concept To. I Would Of Definately Collab'd On This With You. Real Talk Man, That's Dope As Fuck.

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life was what protected him, til the mic began projecting him
best friends sacrificed and threw the mic they ressurected him

Good Shit Man, Foreal keep Droppin.
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Post by Haz »

Good Shit ..... U Stayed On Concept Lines Were
Nice

the crime is not neglected, but besides hes now arrested
but beyond mankind his kind is not rejected

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