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Till My Mic Go Out

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i Wont Listen To These Hazard Addicts Who Dont Appreciate
Tha High They Strt Spazzin Rapid With Captured Captions/
How Im not Good With Rappin How Nothin in my hood iz Happenin
Eagle Like a Lightnin Storm When My Wood is Clappin Leave ya Teeth in Fractionz/
Speak With Crack Attraction Serve u Roc Like Sex Have a "Cum Back Reaction"
Den its My "Come-Stack-Reactin" Pumps Gassed is Blastin "Push fast" im Dashin/
Dis Like Flash Reflection Leave u "Red-In-Speed" Caught Up in Da Hood Like ya Sweata Sleevez
i Wish U Could Be Gettin Me But U Weak Like No Musclez Nigga Still in Vain Like a Dope Struggle/
Step To Tha Mic i Wont Choke Puzzled Ima Blow Ya Brainz Away Like Coke Shuffled in ya Nose
"Cutt Er Nail" Till i Ripp ya Toez Step To Me i'll "Clip-ya-Pose" Record Ya Face When u Torn in Pain
This Four Will Face Ya Torso Plate Let Tha Core Go Strait Leave U Undaground Like " Low Rate"/
With Earth Play Tell Me Why U Change Ya Terms Mo Den ya Wordplay Jus Swerve U Ain Worth Taste
Leave U "Pushed-in-Raw" Like a Birth Race We Dealin Homos Like This A Church Case Work "YAY!"/
Like ya Papers Signed Parentz Took U Fa Dinna? When He Hit Da Lottery U'll B "Hookin wit a winner
U Can Feel Me Or Not Like Keepin Virginity But i'll Have a "Hole-Out-Ya-Stomach" Like birth imagery/
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Eagle Like a Lightnin Storm When My Wood is Clappin Leave ya Teeth in Fractionz/
Speak With Crack Attraction Serve u Roc Like Sex Have a "Cum Back Reaction"

hot ass bar^^^ overall good shit...the title reminds me off em's song 'till i collapse' 4 some reason lol..anyways nice drop doe -1-
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LOL Fa'real ... Thanks Fa Da Feed Back
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pretty dope you're gettin better with gettin your point across in less words as well as structurign yourself and making things flow, your rhyme scheme was dope i liked it i tried something like this before, but anyway nice drop keep it up.

fav line:i Wish U Could Be Gettin Me But U Weak Like No Musclez Nigga Still in Vain Like a Dope Struggle/
Step To Tha Mic i Wont Choke Puzzled Ima Blow Ya Brainz Away Like Coke Shuffled in ya Nose
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Aiight Thankzz Fa Da Feed Back Micz
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Speak With Crack Attraction Serve u Roc Like Sex Have a "Cum Back Reaction"
Den its My "Come-Stack-Reactin" Pumps Gassed is Blastin "Push fast" im Dashin/

everyone has there own opinion but i really liked that line it was hott
Think iM Trippin? Tie Ma Shoe...
Cant Stand me? Sit the fuck Down...
Cant Face me? Then Turn the Fuck around...

u Cant Break The Bitch That Thinkz Nothin Of u!
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lol Aiight babie Thankz
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