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Kawnvikt
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The Return Of Pain

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All I See Is Pain And Remorse I Cant See The Flame From The Tortch Its Like My Brain Has Been Scorched And I Cant Pray For No More Because Im Facin This War With Unlucky Criminal Tactics As My Homies Get Blasted My Heart Des Backflips For A Moment We Was Laughin Now Im Facin Your Casket And Im Askin Why Did This Happen To Loose A Friend Is Like To Loose Your Head Because You Knowin You Could Be Dead What Would've Happened If You Woulda Just Said "No" So Now It Echos These Thoughts Into Your Mind Hopin You Could Rewind Time Back To The Prime Time To Where You Lived The Prime Life/ Only A Minute Agoa The Minute Was Cold When You Body Is To Fold And Now Im Left To Hold A Corpse A Man Dead In My Arms But No One Understood What Really Went Wrong/ Ive Been Gone Yall Wondered Why I Left For A Minute Because The Only Thing I Remember The Bullet Was Hittin/ My Man My Homie My Boy Who Would Do Anything For Nothing Just A Boy From The Hood/ White Trash Is What They'd Call It Scrubbin For Some Change To Put In His Wallet/ Now As The Story Unfolds My Best Fuckin Friend His Body Grows Cold Im Left Alone/ Now Im Going Insane Because For The First Time I Saw The Return Of Pain/

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I Replaced Faith Where The Screws Tap Into The Bible I Was At The Recital They Asked Whos That In A Midst Of All This New Rap I Was Bangin Beats With Jesus Behind The Hay Stacks So Try To Stay Laid Back Cuz The Way I Face Rap Is Readin The Scripture Nobody Can Replace That
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Post by Momeijah »

Was Feelin it, Of Course it Coulda Been Structured Better... But it Was Easy 2 Make Out The Rhymes, Breaths Etc.

Cant Pray For No More Because Im Facin This War With Unlucky Criminal Tactics As My Homies Get Blasted My Heart Des Backflips For A Moment We Was Laughin Now Im Facin Your Casket And Im Askin Why Did This Happen

Fav Lines^ i Think u Explained it Well. So Props On That. Multis Were Present And inner Rhymes Were Dope. Flowed Nice Even Tho u Never Used a Certain Structure n i Think it Would Sound Good On Audio.
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Post by Kawnvikt »

THanks Bro it was just me tryna get something out you know. I guess it wasnt much but it meant alot wanna those deep inside flows.
I Replaced Faith Where The Screws Tap Into The Bible I Was At The Recital They Asked Whos That In A Midst Of All This New Rap I Was Bangin Beats With Jesus Behind The Hay Stacks So Try To Stay Laid Back Cuz The Way I Face Rap Is Readin The Scripture Nobody Can Replace That
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Post by Mac »

Good Shit Man. Was Pretty Deep And Emotional, Agreeing With Domino It Would Sound Good on Audio. Your Multies Are Definately Improving, Over All Pretty Hot Piece Man. Keep Dropping.
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