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Vendetta Pt. 2 (Dissin LadieHazard And itz.Nuthan)

Post by Momeijah »

Fuck u


Outlooks Are Valid Only if You're Part Of it To Start-With ..||
So Don't Leak Another's ink, ur Name Will Become a Target ..||
Don't Rap About Death, if No-One u Know Has Departed ..||
And if ur a Bum With No Liscence, Get The Fuck Off The Car-Shit ..||
ur Hands Will Lose ur Life, u Will 'Ghost' Write For-Another ..||
Now What Are u Worth? ur Mother's Saved Cash From The Rubber ..||
ur New Lease Of Life, is Writing Bullshit, And Sitting-at-Home ..||
Wasting, Ridding Yourself Of Reality, ur Flesh Skin-And-ur-Bone ..||
Making Up Lies To Find a Place Among an Online Community ..||
Cuz The Real World Rejected ur Ass, You'll Never Live in Unity ..||
Do u intend To Carry On Like This??? ur On ur Way 2 a Breakdown ..||
if E-Beef Gets 2 u So Much, i Think its Time For a Break-Now ..||
i Donno Whats More Dumb, That Or a Bum Actin Like-a-Pimp ..||
if u Ain't Got Any Ho's Or Hummers, Why Do u Write-The-Shit?? ..||
it's Pittiful, im Saying Whats On My Mind, Directed at u ..||
i Dare u To Diss Me Back, This is Vendetta Part 2 ..||



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Post by 16 Micz »

u suck, it sucked, i didnt see any bar impressive enough for inspire me to leave feedback...
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Thanks For The Feedback Dude :)
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Post by Mac »

was alright to me. i think you could of came harder since it was a diss but overall nice verse man keep dropping homie
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LoL Ty Ty For The Feed Guys, it Was Pretty Rushed, But im Quittin Anyway, Cant Be Assed Rappin Lol
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LoL Ty Ty For The Feed Guys, it Was Pretty Rushed, But im Quittin Anyway, Cant Be Assed Rappin Lol
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your quitting rap? whys that?
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

dude this wasnt bad to me at all, wasnt a very hard diss but it got its point across, dont quit, cuz if you quit your jus admittin you suck homie

keep yuh head up
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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please quit!!!!
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Post by Momeijah »

Haha, its Been in Discussion For a While. And im Gnna Be Busy as Hell This Yr And i Aint Got The Energy 2 Keep Writin
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Post by Lawgix »

lol man didn't u quit once already? if nething take a break n let ur mind re-engergize but don't quit
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LoL Yeah i Did, But Writins Became a Bit Hard Recently And im Gnna Be Busier So its Just Gnna Be a Waste Of Time Lol
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Post by drunken jesus »

this was alright not too hard hitting for a diss, the scheme could have been alot better
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Mac »

Domino, You're Never To Busy To Rap. You Can Freestyle In Your Head 24/7. I Wouldn't Suggest Quitting, You've Came Along Way And Elevated A Lot For You To Just Throw It Away.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i agree wit Mac
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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