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Good Guy..Eh?...Bad Guy..Eh? ft.Sist

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Sist: Red

I stand behind my lines the grand designs a lie the hands a time fly by
understand my rhyme one of the plans of mine is to expand your mind
so im defined like a prophet each sign is a topic so i try to rhyme off it
this is my knowlege, my conscience, the complexity, my dominance
intellectually awesome content regardless of lyrical carnage as an artist
with politics the smartest, the least hardest,still decease targets
and leave emcees ceased all the way from the west to the middle east
jumping leaps without pumping heat yet still spitting on thumping beats
punching me is stupid cuz my punches are like my flows fluid
if ur going to kill me do it my message will always be a nuisance
ive new since day one i was the truest always striving for improvements
this dudes been using methods so confusing that the message
is often abused paraphrased n twisted until its actually religious
a master of physics i could beat ur whole crew so gather ur fittest
im going to rip this n all statistics convicted for being the shit kid
mystic when i flip it ballistic plus i got a bottle tip it back n sip it

Money aint comin in good , but i never touch the liquor
Cause everythin can be solved in a sane mind i figure
I dont need to be killin people or selling children crack
Just give some to life and itll give you some more back
Take a visit to the orphan homes and give em some love
And one day ill be rewarded for it from heaven above
Always gettin into misunderstandings with my girl
But i dont wanna loose the only one that fills up my world
So i chill it down keep the peace cause calm tempers win
Love comes with trust , so stop askin where shes been
Always take an early morning stroll and enjoy nature
I got dumped yesterday but doesnt mean i gotta hate her
Feelin put down and dont know what to do?
Look at life with brightness and itll be bright to you
Just put both my arms out and enjoy the wonderfull breeze
Cause every single bad thing happens for a very good reason


got the streets covered savagely with a strategy never seen in reality
a crazy personality the worst half of me who rapidly spits unpractically
i switch hollow tips naturally clips hit psychopathically the wicks lite
casualties casually burned like calories tragedies turned to salaries
illmatic see! informed fatalies were warned before the baby was torn
from the mother unborn with a knife deformed for his life any night
i transform into a killing machine extra supplements for performance
like im still in a dream and this destruction warrants a different scheme
so each introduction has a new construction the theme is never relucant
ill give you instructions to save ur life hide from my site i maybe white
but i can fight so ducking me is productively actually deducting me
cuz when youve had enough of me i can not succeed cuz i thrive
when you bleed the evil seed that could never be without an evil deed
bullets move at beatle speed so the people see their own death
it comes thru lines like phone threats i keep you on your toes
just to keep ur bones fresh also any moment i could kill any opponent

I take my head off my rock-hard pillow, the one that stinks
and look out my window at a world darker than black ink
my wallet's emptier than my pockets so i grab the bottle
get in my car , not much fuel , and i hit it full throttle
recklessly driving my attention focused on why my life's bad
dont sleep or bring food in the house , and my wife's mad
Thinkin i cant stand this i better drive off this here cliff
maybe then she'll be really happy for me , wherever she is
dont try to convince me that things always get better
cause thats exactly what i thought when i first met her
and since im about to end this not so pleasurable life
i might aswell go out and kill or rape somebody tonight
grabbed the first chick i could find and stuck my dick up
but still i didnt feel much better and i had to give up
slitting my throat and my wrists is an eternal sin you say?
well i dont really give a fuck im going to hell anyway


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Sist = me.
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Post by Viral »

good shit......i like it...for some reason tho it wasnt wat i expected it to be...seemed pretty basic....i mean there were rhymes n wat not..but not wat is normally dropped by u guys....keep it up tho!...word is bond...VIRAL!



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Post by complexity »

I agree. It could have had a little more substance.

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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

It was cool to see each of your styles put together in this piece, its defo worth the read for all you fucks that havent gotten around to looking at it yet!

Anyway, I liked what you wrote about and how you brought it out in your lyrics. The good guy bad guy thing was really cool - this was a hawt piece - good job!
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