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Gettin a Jist of Spittin Writtens thru Lingustics Twisted To Inflict Whits,
Ina Split Instant Misfits Shiftin the Missions of Postions is the Difference,
Please Believe Me I Freely Leave Thee competion Beneathe Me so Easy,
If Need Be Ill Release G's till you Meet Thee G.O.D. to Feel the Reel Peace,
I'll give Chaney & Bush some Rage ina Look jus Mainly to Push,
One more Page in my Books, Im On another level like T.H.C in the Kush,
But Ive Cleaned out my System like a Fein turnin Christian,
Vowed to never Believe in the System, as it Seems to be Distant,
It really isnt, its Closer than Death, Im Blessed to be Sober, Im Over the Sess,
Ima Soldier, a Vet, but theres More to be Said, Im like a Bolder when Wet,
Im Hard as can be yet you cant Stand on Me, if you Challenge Me!,
I Kill you Randomly like the Government would for Treason & Blasphomy,
My Multies are Vicious so ReSolve ur Suspitions that Im False when Im Rippin,
Open my Vault and Im Gifted to leave you Assaulted and Lifted,
Ill leave you Twisted and Open, Im invadin to conquer like Hitler did Polland,
In the end Ima takw away your voice like when sick kids Limphnods are Swollen....
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Lawgix »

this is a really nice drop G... i liked this line alot

But Ive Cleaned out my System like a Fein turnin Christian,
Vowed to never Believe in the System, as it Seems to be Distant,
It really isnt, its Closer than Death, Im Blessed to be Sober, Im Over the Sess,
Ima Soldier, a Vet, but theres More to be Said, Im like a Bolder when Wet,
Im Hard as can be yet you cant Stand on Me, if you Challenge Me!,
I Kill you Randomly like the Government would for Treason & Blasphomy,
My Multies are Vicious so ReSolve ur Suspitions that Im False when Im Rippin,
Open my Vault and Im Gifted to leave you Assaulted and Lifted,
Ill leave you Twisted and Open, Im invadin to conquer like Hitler did Polland,
In the end Ima takw away your voice like when sick kids Limphnods are Swollen....

good job homie
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx man, i wrote this to Point of No Return Instrumental by Immortal Technique.

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Post by >Urb@n-Leg3nd< »

Nice Mayne....Real Nice...

Liked thiz Line Alot

I'll give Chaney & Bush some Rage ina Look jus Mainly to Push,
One more Page in my Books, Im On another level like T.H.C in the Kush
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx man, feedbacks appreciated!!!
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Post by Spoof »

holy fuck that was mad good! I loved these ones:

Gettin a Jist of Spittin Writtens thru Lingustics Twisted To Inflict Whits,
Ina Split Instant Misfits Shiftin the Missions of Postions is the Difference,
Please Believe Me I Freely Leave Thee competion Beneathe Me so Easy,
If Need Be Ill Release G's till you Meet Thee G.O.D. to Feel the Reel Peace,

^^^^^your vocab is shining :D


Im Hard as can be yet you cant Stand on Me, if you Challenge Me!,
I Kill you Randomly like the Government would for Treason & Blasphomy,
My Multies are Vicious so ReSolve ur Suspitions that Im False when Im Rippin,
Open my Vault and Im Gifted to leave you Assaulted and Lifted,
Ill leave you Twisted and Open, Im invadin to conquer like Hitler did Polland,
In the end Ima takw away your voice like when sick kids Limphnods are Swollen....

nice nice nice nice :D
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Post by precise »

lol @ lawgix basically quotin the whole piece

yea i was feelin this, nice rhymes, some nice content in there for sure

Vowed to never Believe in the System, as it Seems to be Distant, It really isnt,

my fav line ^^^
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

Mad Props to Yall for the FeedBack, thanx to all that left feed.

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Post by complexity »

Yah. Nice man. Honestly though this lyrical stuff is awesome. But eventually you need to work on rapping on topics. At some point its the rhymes guiding your flow & not your mind. Which is a problem. So I would like to see that.

The first 3-4 bars were my favorite. A good read.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx plex ill keep that in mind
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UppiN!!!!!
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

yup i enjoyed reading this, was alot of parts i liked so i wont go into the trouble of pointing them all out lol, but i like your views and your shit is hot
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx first lady....

mos def appreciate your feedback
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UppiN
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dat shit was da hottest ive heard from you keep it up my nigga!
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