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Jus Me Rhymin
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Not bad...you thought ur flow was gonna be bad and it really isn't. Couple of things...I don't know what kind of mic you use...but if it's a condensed mic, stage mic, standard mic or computer mic....ALWAYS ALWAYS ALWAYS get urself a Pop-filter. It's the "P's" and "B's" that always blare into the speaker loud as hell and kills an audio. They're $15 at a music store and definately improve sound quality by 100% If you can't afford one...do like I did in the beginning. You know those wooden or plastic rings that ur grandma uses to sew? It's like a circle and you out the material in the circle and it clamps down on it to make the material straight and tight to be sewn on? Well I took one of those and one of my Doo-rags and put the Doo-Rag in the ring (because the material was thin like a filter) and I would hold it up infront of the mic before I rapped. Sounds stupid...but I was broke and it worked!

Ur overall sound quality was good. I can here ur vocals very well. The muzik was very faded up in the background...but the vocals were clear. If you had sumthin to filter ur air...the vocals would've been really clean. The other thing you might wanna work on is ur breathing. The flow was good but you struggled for air at a few points and you could tell. That's either a sign that you need to work on breathing exercises...or you need to write a few less words in that bar.

Over all...a decent audio. I'm gonna give it a 7 & 1/2 outta 10 seeing how this is the first audio I've heard from you. You get the right equipment and solve the "runnin outta air" problem...you'll be a really good emcee. I look forward to hearing more.
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Thanx Man I really Appreciate the FeedBack. And yes im always scepticul of what ppl are gonna say, but in the end it only matters what i think. and ima get at you about that sound board you got for sale in a couple weeks.


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damn it says i need a real player update wtf?
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Idk What to tell you, but yall that DL'ed this i would like some feedback, thanx!!!


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downloaded 7 times and one person left feed right????
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