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-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 3:31 am

http://illestlyrics.com/board/post24595.html#24595

topic is like i wanna be wit dis gurl and she wanna be wit me so its like a 'call out 2 her' i guess lol enjoy *yes i no the structure iz blah but it goes 2 the beat i picked out nicely*

i wanna sail across the blue,dont care if it cost a few
as long as i know,i get'ta be lost with u
goin on'a cruise-n-trips,ye the news iz quick
this dude iz sick,of lookin 4 a gurl who aint rude n shit
but u put up,a fight so strong that helped me right my wrongs
and despite how long,it took us 2 become tight this song
iz justa another way that helps us 2 move on
i dont wanna lace u with ice cuz ur taste is so nice
the type i wanna dress up,and make my wife

feed?

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 3:35 am

nice dude, a lil basic but for what it for its tight, had some good meanin and shit behind, could use a lil more emotion and originality but that'll come out in the audio, overall for as short as it was it was tight. i liked it man, big ups

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 3:37 am

thank u..uppin

precise · Post by **precise** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 3:59 am

it was straight

still in progress right? like symbolikul said, fairly basic but thats what ya need for an audio piece to make sense so its cool

good job bro keep at it

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:22 am

ye its in progress homie..but uppinnn

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:24 am

PrecisE wrote:it was straight

still in progress right? like symbolikul said, fairly basic but thats what ya need for an audio piece to make sense so its cool

good job bro keep at it

uh. I don't agree. Maybe in the mainstream. You can make it as complex as you want. If its good people will listen to it over n over again until they get every part of it.

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:27 am

complexity wrote:
PrecisE wrote:it was straight

still in progress right? like symbolikul said, fairly basic but thats what ya need for an audio piece to make sense so its cool

good job bro keep at it
uh. I don't agree. Maybe in the mainstream. You can make it as complex as you want. If its good people will listen to it over n over again until they get every part of it.

plex i agree with u,i mean i see there point but look @ fabolous,cassidy,big pun they all made it mainstream and were pretty complex..but it was justa expierment u no..but thanks 4 the feed guys

precise · Post by **precise** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:29 am

on the contrary, topical pieces generally arent complex as hell, so up yours, hahahaha

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:32 am

lmaoo..but see thats where originalitys gotta come in u no..so 'up urs 2' lol

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:40 am

Sorry being rude as shit, n not leaving feedback. I liked the concept homie. Good luck with this

precise · Post by **precise** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:40 am

hahaha word

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:43 am

lol thanks *flips precise off*

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 6:39 am

thanks homie

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 7:29 am

precise the point of a "topical" piece is creativity and complexity, if it didn't have a topic why would it be complex...

precise · Post by **precise** » Thu Feb 15, 2007 7:36 am

its a long story now, i was talking rhymescheme didnt need to be complex for a topical audio track, lol i was TRYIN to give the guy a compliment but i dont think he liked it lol

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