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URKMAN
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U kno they got me trapped up in dis delusion
solve so many problems but still havent ended up wit no conclusions
feel like im insane rarely even no my own name only way to figure out if I shot my own brain
I kno I might be livin pain to many people talkin crazy to me I might jus go insane
Im tired of hearin lies and hear people cry about da life dey live how bout ya juz go crazy and start juz poppin X pills
I have no reason to breathin on dis cold earth I wish my mother and my father wouldnt neva gave me birth
So now Im prayin in a church tellin God where it really hurts tellin God im thank im cursed he told me son da truth really hurts
I told him I was gonna burst sometimes I see myself rollin up in a hearse prayin to myself in front of da holy church
I might as well jus foget it be a man and juz deal wit it gone head grab me a cuople Ice and juz chill wit it
One day we all gonna be all zapped and head fo tha trap and live a life of sin until heaven gates open
Well ima keep my head up neva eva keep it down from da city H-Town till one day Ill be found but let alwayz be known alwayz have my chrome till da day Ill be gone but I kno I will alwayz Be TRAPPED!!!
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

for one you need a link, like say from dominos drop that you left feed on, and another you never showed for our battle, so im not leavin feed, MUH FUCKA!!!
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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SOME EMOTION BUT NOT VERY GOOD
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~*Blitz*~
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

lol @ ghost anyway

So now Im prayin in a church tellin God where it really hurts tellin God im thank im cursed he told me son da truth really hurts

^^really the only part that stuck out for me, nice drop though
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