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Complexity Ft. Gt

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{ Complexity}
did i lose-my-point? maybe i broke-my-pen//
call me "the pope" i have the stroke-again//
got boos-n-joints, and i'm smoking-blends//
so much "dope" it has me quoting-friends//
soon I'll be on def jams label, promoting-them//
yah!, if i'm left unstable, and the ocean-ends//
i'm not condoning, people who have stolen//
but my Dna is flowing, and i'm all for cloning//

{ Goat-ASs }
damn, i'm holding my hands i got balls like nolan//
my girls glands are swollen, i fucked her in the colan//
in poland actually we made a giant "fucking snow-man"//
in the snow we were rolling but she is so controlling//
she stuck pins in my penis and she went bowling//
her pussy was soiled we broiled her juices//
no excuses I was thirsty and not use to this//



My verse is new, goat-asses, is a little old, but they went together decent, so i dropped it. I was suppose to drop his and write something a while ago.
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Post by 16 Micz »

lol entertaininga lil goat ass is disgusting but hilarious. To be different is better so i up him on having his on style im not sure bout suckin juices but i thats what u do..overall ill give it a 7/10 because it was entertaining and i kinda liked the rhyme scheme..
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Post by drunken jesus »

your verse was good, lost flow towards the end though

goats verse was garbage
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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