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~*Blitz*~
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i was feeling it, nice drop...keep em coming
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one of ur more 'i know weapons' kinda pieces lol..but its koo..im not really into talkin about em unless im makin reference if im gonna 'shoot u blah blah' in'a battle but its not bad..koo shit -1-
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Post by Batman »

guns are my hobby too so i liked it. nice structure and metaphors were ok. nice closer!



keep it up
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yeah one of your better gun drops i also liked your closer keep it up fam getting better
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