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not packing a mack to attack
i'm back on my tact rapping
savage on tracks blasting
grabbing facets of half assed
wack kids and fashioning
the greatest masterpieces
in rap believe this, hate us,
even jesus can see the flavors
innate in debating with hating
your patiently waiting degrading
evading my persuation aiming
to display that you ain't nathan
hmm
i made it, from hot tracks
to top cash rhyme racing
structure round killing a budget
above the ground filling the numbness
cutting clouds building and busting
this lovely sound syllable structure
killing a junction shits real and its nothing
feeling the dust hit from southern bounce
to chopped and screwed the godly dude
made his mark and proved it ain't hard to do
to scar and bruise rhythms and twist'em
sickening vicious encrypted sinister
mystic spliff bent intense vivid words
bursting absurd thats got known for
putting herbs in dirt like pot growers
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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comment on this bitches
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by complexity »

yah this was dope as hell, i loved the scheme, and it flowed nice, well worth the read, and its better than your last piece, can't wait to hear some audio. 9.2/10
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yeah this is a semi-speed rap piece
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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