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~Symbolikull~
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Its like Im Earnin Respect while Im Workin off Debt,
Spendin Money jus Burnin my Checks, Still Learnin to Text,
Im Pist Though, I loved and lost, choked up like Slit Throats,
Which Flow is gonna Hit Ghost, none of em not even This Close,
The drama Never Ends, but at the end of the day who Remembers Them,
My raps act like guillotines I Sever Heads, I try to pick myself up but my Levers Dead,
I gotta Get Up, Live Up, Mix Up, but my soul is constantly left Ripped Up,
Breathin in Thick Dust, Which Sucks, worse than Six Sluts wit Ribs Crushed,
Stay Hushed and Stand Quiet, my lyrics invade slums like Iran Riots,
My Hand Violence, Cant Silence and Ban Science of my Rap Giants,
I Bring the Curse InFact, to Think the Worst Im Trapped,
Usin Dreams to Burst in Back, raps Seen my Thirst to Act,
Like Beef don't Hurt my Staff, no need for a Link to Burn the Wack,
Our Beat will Surge the Craft, into the Street wit Gurth of Facts,
No Ones Worth Mine, I don't Work Nines but Jerk Spines when I Exert Minds,
Every Verb Rhymes, wit Obscure Lines of Purged Crimes to End Inert Lives…..



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UppIN 4 Feed
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

how is it that i give feed on almost every drop in this forum but i cant get feed on my shit?

jussa question
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

I gotta Get Up, Live Up, Mix Up, but my soul is constantly left Ripped Up,


^^ my fav line outta the whole drop
The rhyming was cool and I never got bored reading this drop - It seemed to stay together nicely the whole way through as well - good job ghost!
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Post by 8th »

this was hot as always man.


I gotta Get Up, Live Up, Mix Up, but my soul is constantly left Ripped Up,
Breathin in Thick Dust, Which Sucks, worse than Six Sluts wit Ribs Crushed,

No Ones Worth Mine, I don't Work Nines but Jerk Spines when I Exert Minds,
Every Verb Rhymes, wit Obscure Lines of Purged Crimes to End Inert Lives….

^favorite lines. All of them were good though, so picking favorites was kinda hard. As always, you came nice with the multis. It was a different topic, which is always nice. I dont know really what else to say but keep it up. You been doin any audios lately? thats the one part of your game that could use a good amount of improvement. but jeah, hot shit. keep dropin and stay up.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx you 2 for the feed
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yeah homie nice nice nice...

No Ones Worth Mine, I don't Work Nines but Jerk Spines when I Exert Minds,
Every Verb Rhymes, wit Obscure Lines of Purged Crimes to End Inert Lives….

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You Always Elavate...

Good shit to see keep it up
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Thanx lil homie
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

this was good man keep it up

fav lines VVV

Its like Im Earnin Respect while Im Workin off Debt,
Spendin Money jus Burnin my Checks, Still Learnin to Text,
Im Pist Though, I loved and lost, choked up like Slit Throats,
Which Flow is gonna Hit Ghost, none of em not even This Close,
The drama Never Ends, but at the end of the day who Remembers Them
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx for the feed Street
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