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Post by 16 Micz »

Leave em all devoured in hours, this power is ours
takes cowards to show u my power
cause if ground 0 is where they left the towers..
imma leave u at ground negative 6, starin at the roots of my flowers
these fags hide their identities, fight queers with a lil energy
fight queers?im predjudice i fight queers until we reach an amenity
for jews i yearn with a penalty, they get burned with persistancy
burned like judas did jesus but they let that fade out their memory
but the wheels turning consistantly, they're concerned of my victory
mentally i picture them planning to demish me but physically
cant lead these chicks into losin their virginity
pussy was always a natural affinity,affinity that lasts to infinity
decided my destiny, by dividing my legacies
subsiding by treachery,while ur hiding your life sexually
these lyrics are guiding my memory,providing mind definitely
you keep sliding im striding and abiding mine regulary
im hiding my chemistry, colliding coke with my Hennesey
keep trying my melody, supplying my energy
riding or dying try deciding my destiny
you dont threaten me, even though your known for psychotic tendencies
16 bars and 1 mic bond, and not chemically.
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Post by 16 Micz »

only reason i did this is because ekoms said i couldnt do a piece like this its going in my aim profile but yea feedback please.
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Post by Viral »

lol even tho i told u off in da other thread dis is pretty decent...only thing is its all rhyming like dime time rhyme crime lime prime and so on...not in dat exact manner..but yeah...id give it a 7/10....i say if u would drop more often ud be able to drop better...lol and Ekoms says everyone cant drop ne thing...lol his lame ass hasnt dropped shit for like MONTHS!!...haaaaaaaa
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