AJ VS DA GUY(DA GUY)

[AJ]

8 Bars or less
no flips
no crew votes
no dick ridin
3-0 or 4-1=KO
first to 5= win

[RH1NO]

this is my check in post time limit n you drop first

[AJ]

1 day checkin in

[AJ]

Da Guy u aint touching-i//people know AJ sicker than a russian-spy
u come to the streets ul get sprayed//i got ur flow cracked like a tasty easter-egg
see i get love like Jay Z back in harlem//while ur flow aint getting bigger i guess it got alot in common with erection problems speaking of which im one u aint solving
il put ur ass in a coffin and keep ur head in my holster//cause AJ get it poppin like bread in a toaster
im so sharp my words are like swords//il make ya do kick flips like rell fiasco does the skateboards
homie il leave ya looking like a car-wreck//when i split ur ass in two like a card-deck//
my punches hit hard make u look like a character in star-trek//u gona see more cuttings than an extended length show of art-attack
i aint got 1 so i dont worry about a heart-attack//word for word track for track
im no 1 u can stand-with//cause i go up while u stay stuck somethin like a jammed-lift
il eat u up like a sandwich and spit u out in particiles//the kid get paper but u only get the one with the articles//i got fly rides i aint talking the ones at the carnivals my paper sit high well build like arnold-was
when it comes to the stats are shots just cant be matched//cause i drop more punches than 12 rounds of a boxing match//i know the time and u dont its like our watches dont match
since the eggs hatched im back worse sicker than hitler//guns well endowed more bigger than dirk-diggler
u aint got nuts its like u allergic to snickers//ur flows on and off more than ur girls knickers//while mine just gets sicker till i overcome it like anastashia//im so fucking ill they wana send me 2 euthanasia best believe il blaze-ya//
i can assure u cause u aint sick at-all a mouthful of cal-phol could cure u
see i brighten the horizon/let enlightenment get arising/i get excitement from ur demise-and/il give u a bin 2 throw ur desguise-in//cause i got my own style while u biting like-tyson//exchanging words with me is like exchanging rights-with tyson//when i get writing i strike like lightening//
its frightening how fast i go forwards//it aint smart battling me its like tryna steal a angry bears porridge

[RH1NO]

^^ THATS NOT 8 BARS OR LESS

[AJ]

it went longer than i expected my bad just drop the same length urself bro simple as that

[RH1NO]

"A"bsolute "J"oke dis cat pollutes -flows/
wit that minor league average how is you- pro /

dont even know how many bars- u -left/
walk away unscathed, toned, n sexy from the scars- u -left/

plastic guns ill float ya toy n sink ya clip/
similar to ez but ill quote ya boy ya aint said shit

thought i was bad kid but work on ya structure/
it looks like ya sheets ask ya girl cuz i fucked her/

beach cruisers wit white walls cuz u dont have -a- car/
free pictures on the net n udont have an av-at-ar/

ya flows is sick but like u carryin sars/
im like conan the barbarian im buryin-bars/

u gotta give props ta aj that was a lotta script ta write/
alotta jits pop out ya mouth too bad none of the shit was tight/

flip white like ice chips frosted -flakes- r -greeeeeat/
long winded talker wit no scripts i tossed -dis- fake-wit -8/

[AJ]

can we get some votes in

[-TraMaTiK-]

ya flows is sick but like u carryin sars/
im like conan the barbarian im buryin-bars/

u gotta give props ta aj that was a lotta script ta write/
alotta jits pop out ya mouth too bad none of the shit was tight/

flip white like ice chips frosted -flakes- r -greeeeeat/
long winded talker wit no scripts i tossed -dis- fake-wit -8/

pretty good^^

overall tho i think only a few katz were tied..

like Multis n wordplay...

but far as everything else goes i think 'da guy' took the rest...good battle tho u both didnt come weak..u packed a punch i cud say...lol but my vote = Da Guy

[AJ]

uppin votes

[RH1NO]

appreciate the feed 1-0 uppin

[Lawgix]

aj if u make a battle that says 8 bars or less u don't go a gajillion bars over... it confuses the competition... and then nobody will read ur battle cause its too damn long... lol n work on ur structure its hard to read ur shit man... seriously

multies - i'll give em to AJ cause Da Guy u really need to work on ur word play alot of ur shit didn't make sense really

punches - da guy
flow - its a bit of a tie
structure - da guy
wordplay - ummm its a tie but da guy didn't do so well lol

so i'll give this to da guy... aj work on ur stucture cause alot of ppl ain't gonna be able to read ur shit n that goes against votes if ur shit is not legible so work on ur structure like this

this is an example of a bar
this is another example of a bar//

don't run em all together like this// cause it doesn't look well to the readers
and then u go n do this lol

see what i mean?

good battle

[RH1NO]

^^all feed appreciated 2-0 uppin

[RH1NO]

3-0 K.O. good battle

[~*Blitz*~]

good battle boys

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