Death And Suicide

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:30 pm

Damn!!!

I would undoubtably have to say this is the bes drop ive ever seen/read from you, the imagry and metas were sick. flow wasnt too bad but theres always room for improvement.

tha idea of death is ta die young as late as possible
no such thing as livin a short life death's un-stoppable
cant always say ya know you'll be livin tomorrow
give me another lung my last breaths are borrowed

they said it was fate when i made a mistake
now bring me death because life isnt that great....

^^fav lines

big ups kid, nice to see you elevatin

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Tue Mar 27, 2007 12:21 pm

yeah, this was a kick ass piece from you - I think its my fav from you that I've read....is this the shit you were working on last night? You got creative with it and you brought that out nicely in this verse. I enjoyed reading it. WHEW for JJ!!

SlickMex · Post by **SlickMex** » Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:18 pm

Yea mayne it was nice..making me wanna step my game up..Good Drop..n rememba me n u can make a crew jus get at me..

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:28 pm

*feeds you*

LadySam · Post by **LadySam** » Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:53 pm

well coming from ME and our dislikeness for eachother u should take it as a huge compliment haha
ok ill shut up and jus say it

like these ppl here, i think this is one of the best uve written, i think coz it was deep. i enjoyed reading it.

fav lines:
id tie tha noose but i dont think id hang right
lookin kinda like my bars my body hang tight

cant always say ya know you'll be livin tomorrow
give me another lung my last breaths are borrowed

they said it was fate when i made a mistake
now bring me death because life isnt that great

so there u go mate, i fed u =)

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Wed Mar 28, 2007 12:47 am

yeah, def your best written.. think this is the first piece i've seen form u that isn't about guns.. lol.. topic is kinda played put tho, it was def a nice piece (didn't care bout the flow or structure since u warned us.. haha).. but u had some ill imagery in this one..keep it up man, can def see some elevation here.. had some nice quoteables as well..

cant always say ya know you'll be livin tomorrow
give me another lung my last breaths are borrowed

suicide tha permanent solution for a temporary situation
ice to tha brains and blades to my throat patiently waitin

they said it was fate when i made a mistake
now bring me death because life isnt that great....

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:45 am

overall hot piece JJ no doubt...loved it all actually lol...stay doin u homie -1-

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Wed Mar 28, 2007 3:49 pm

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Thu Mar 29, 2007 1:12 am

lmfao

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Thu Mar 29, 2007 1:58 pm

just fucking with you kiddo, it showed alot more content than most of the other shit you dropped here overall it was solid but like you said the structure and rhyme scheme were choppy

and my pics aren't random, i use them when duty calls

Stina · Post by **Stina** » Mon Apr 02, 2007 9:46 am

holy fuck i loved this! specially the first line .. the first line is always a good key to hookin somone to your verse ..

"suicide tha permanent solution for a temporary situation"

sad, but true.

and also, I liked this one:
"for some reasin im infatuated with death
id slit my own throat just ta gain some respect "

great peice over all actually.

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