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A Sequel of Smoke

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

A ghost-like ekoms production with sequence.. we decided to just cypher this collab out.. was intended to be horrocore although its not completely HORROR-ish.. n e ways.. leave some feedback or w/e

Sequence: Lick the Frost Off Crusty-Brains..Working The torso With Nives And Rusty-Chains..//
Quickly Slice Your Tounge For a Reason-of-Fun Im Hot and cold Like four seasons-in-one..//

E-komS: hypodermic needles squeezed-in-ya-tongue, now u sneeze-when-ya-run, ur breathin's-begun
like an air-borne virus.. u got a disease-in-ya-lung, and it only leaves-when-ya-done

Sequence: Get The Pliers Start Cracking-your-ribs High Voltage Shots that Start Snaping-Your-Limbs..//
With A Heavy hammer just to crack-your-head.. i wont stop torcher before i get the fact-your-dead..//

E-komS: take a cartridge and smack-u-red, load the magazine for an impact-of-lead,
venomous enough to cause the attack-to-spread, and i'll watch u slowly die till its black-u-bled

Sequence: medievel thoughts run around my head prepelled with a body that im hooking-knives-through..//
Even Those Picaso paintins gonna be looking-like-you when i slice and serve you in two..//

E-komS: as these knuckles curve-thru-ya-crew, i'll turn ya nerves-hue-to-blue,
cuz when it comes to blades i'm strict...like a curfew-n-school

Sequence: the victims scream, your gonna be worse debating jesus tempts me but i truley no that im cursed by satan..//
No one under stand my mind nor the perspection ill switch around the life support with acid and a lethal injection..//

E-komS: ...of this evil-infection that'll reach people's-directions to leave-u-in-sections,
stealth cloaked ya death behind a see-thru-detection, so u couldn't 'mirror' back this Smokey Sequel-'reflection'

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

didnt like Seq drops to much actually, he would rhyme one line then rhyme another one, and his shit was mos def not horrorcore. Kid you seem to be tryin way to hard or somethin cuz your losin your edge. Ekoms, steady wit them multies (cant no one do it like us) your shit was nice like always, on fire wit the multies.

Nice Drop
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

let me start off with the fact that I hate you both lol
Now that thats out of the way on to the feeeed

This was a cool drop, I liked your piece Sequence, you've come a long way but theres just no touching Ekoms. Sick with the multis, never seen anyone who could spit multis like Ekoms does. Oh so creative, this was a banging piece. Props to you two
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