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~Symbolikull~
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We Keep Witnessin, These Citizens, fightin for their vote for Cheap Politicians wit Sins,
Its like Weak Criticism is In, the Livin Sickness Within is that our Bleek Mission is Dim,

The Theory Is, Serious, our life is almost over, each day we wake up, and Im Furious,
The World is Delirious, the circumstances are Conspiracies Wit writtens from the Pyramids,

So I Jus, keep the Flow in Trust that one day ill be spared when the Globe Implodes to Dust,
My Hope and Love, to the game wit mental Emotions that de-orbit's the Earth ina Focal Thrust,

Is it Liberal Thoughts, or Democracies Prophecies, Im jus a prophet of what God'll Be thru his Prodigy,
An Oddity, on a voyage an Odyssey, you Gotta See, that we can be anything that we Wanna Be,

Its Past Stressful in my Vast Mental capacity occupying the space of the books That Stencil,
Our Future wrote from people who Lacked Pencils, you would fight in the fact that they Let You,

Ima against Biblical Content, so I stay steady wit Lyrical Context, to fight forth againt Political Congress,
And Ridicule Bombs Sent, to conquer our enemies wit nuclear energy I guess im Judicial in Concepts….



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Post by RH1NO »

how about alot quicker next time ya makin me look bad..lol
dope ass drop multies sick as alway flow was great very little choppiness
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx man, the feed is appreciated.
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So I Jus, keep the Flow in Trust that one day ill be spared when the Globe Implodes to Dust,
My Hope and Love, to the game wit mental Emotions that de-orbit's the Earth ina Focal Thrust,

loved that bar^..hot shit dude...i kno we aint been on the best of terms cuz of childish beef but whateva u got sum good shit dude...overall its fire i picked that bar as the best tho...stay at it bro..-1-
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

gracias muchacho!!!!

i aint got no beef wit you anymore man thats old news, its in the past and i dont hold grudges.
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Post by Viral »

the topic was pretty straight....ur rhyme scheme was nice...the multis were good...overall it was pretty good...coulda used a bit more feeling tho.......good shit tho...stay up n keep droppin
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

wat he said ^.. i enjoyed the political usage and the historical/biblical input, for a quick key it seemed like u put some effort in it
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

the feed is simply marvelous....lol

i think thats the first feed in a long time i got from Viral.

Thanx for the feed you guys, i appreciate it, yeah i keyed this in like 10mins Ekoms.

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