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bout 'fake ppl' lol we were bored...




Aj
Tramatik


fake people constandly bringing problem
/i let my anger and words solve em
i know they will keep coming to the day i see my coffin
im nearly getting used to them cause i see them coming so-often
but it gives me that fire like im straight out the oven
they say if they was no hating then there wouldnt be loving
so few have it all while so many have nothing


they decieve u
and expect u 2 believe who?
when u all recieve iz a 'boo'
thats pretty wack,they think im new ta this?
its all mind games but they actin Ludacris
i can hear the evil in there laugh so these fake ppl are trash
the type i wanna juz take 2 the 'stee-pull' and bash
there brains in,until they see the past


what they tryna achieve
constandly tryna decieve who can we believe
no one but ourselves its like everyone else
ot motive we open up and they wana quote us
some times we 2 stupid to even fucking notice


they hatin us n debatin us,cuz they cant create a buzz
let alone be hot from the dome,n getta 'taste from a thug'
fuck that its time 2 buck back
without guns but pens have em sayin 'whats that'
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Post by JigSaw »

this was shit to even post lol no lie it did suck
if ur aming at ppl being fake then be more specfic
"~~~Dont be a jerk and get smoked ova bein resistant cuz wen i likk shots this shitz is persistent~~~" 'JigSaw'
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

as u cud tell we where bored...lol..but thanks..uppin
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Post by RH1NO »

nice topic but id gives this like 5/10 no quotables but i love to see collabs not enough of them flow was ok structure was not so good n coulda been worded better
kinda stayed on topic good drop fellas keep doin ya thing
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

word..we cudda betta but ye man mostly bored n shit u no but thanks
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

i've done better with writers block and a sprained wrist ... next time ur bored get at me with a cypher..
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

yeah for reel you wanna see a cypher check out the first UnCrowned Kings by yours truely and Ekoms.......

this wasnt anything special though fo reel, the flow was off everywhere and wasnt anything to boast at lyrically, but keep doin yalls things, whatever that may be
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by drunken jesus »

EkomS wrote:i've done better with writers block and a sprained wrist ... next time ur bored get at me with a cypher..
basically

i finally got msn again so all ya'll nerds can him me up [email protected]
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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