STORY TELLA

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 3:31 pm

This should be "Fuck All shady-ass Hoez" month here on Illest Lyrics cuz I see quite a few writtens with animosity towards certain females. Well you know the next best thing to a written is an audio. So here it is...exclusive to Illestlyrics and myspace...you hear it on Illest first...my new track called STORY TELLA. This goes to all females that lie and talk like they wanna help you and really don't do shit for you. Women talk good game...and yes...I know not all women are like this...but this is to those who ARE really bogus. So ladies...if any of you here this and have a guilty conscience...it's probably cuz this song applies to you.

So yea...certain ladies of Illest aren't excluded from this track. So for all my niggaz who don't speak up...this is for y'all. I know I've met a few shady hoez...no doubt.

**ALRIGHT...LATEST REVISION OF THE TRACK IS UP

SlickMex · Post by **SlickMex** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:03 pm

That was a good song..ur audios r always tight keep it up..

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:08 pm

not feeling the delivery on this whispered a lil too much in the first verse, the hooks solid, vocals seem a good bit too low, beats ill, lyrics and story were nice

these niggas and bitches need to lay off the net dating on the real though, imo its lame, then again i'm the type of nigga thats sexy in any area code so its nothing to get a bitch, but i dunno ya'll gonna end up electricuting yaselves one of these days when you in a steamy cybersex session with your mouse cord tied around ya balls while you humping your keyboard

i don't even eat pizza if it ain't delivered to my door, let alone pussy

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:17 pm

drunken jesus wrote:not feeling the delivery on this whispered a lil too much in the first verse, the hooks solid, vocals seem a good bit too low, beats ill, lyrics and story were nice

these niggas and bitches need to lay off the net dating on the real though, imo its lame, then again i'm the type of nigga thats sexy in any area code so its nothing to get a bitch, but i dunno ya'll gonna end up electricuting yaselves one of these days when you in a steamy cybersex session with your mouse cord tied around ya balls while you humping your keyboard

i don't even eat pizza if it ain't delivered to my door, let alone pussy

Me fam...oh nooooo...don't get it twisted. You'll never catch me internet dating! Though I can point a few members of the site out that excersice that option! lol But nah...I just wanted to drop it real quick and get an opinion so I know what I can change up...I thought the vocals were kinda low...I was just waiting for a second opinion I guess. Hold on...lemme adjust the vocals and I'll repost and tell me what you think then.

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:28 pm

nah i didn't think you was on that shit, but a few people on here is

i fuck with foreign hoes, ya'll fuck with forum hoes

if i'd fuck with an internet ho she'd have to show up @ my door with a box of condoms, a paper bag(or plastic depending how she looks) and a half gallon of liquor so i'd forget the night

boss status nigga

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:32 pm

drunken jesus wrote:nah i didn't think you was on that shit, but a few people on here is

i fuck with foreign hoes, ya'll fuck with forum hoes

if i'd fuck with an internet ho she'd have to show up @ my door with a box of condoms, a paper bag(or plastic depending how she looks) and a half gallon of liquor so i'd forget the night

boss status nigga

Teef nigga...hoez pay me for dick! But I'm not into prostitution...so it ain't no thang. Gotta pay the costs to be the boss, ya digggg!? lol But nahhh...that way it's not illegal. Hoez have to buy rubbers from me...if they look good and I feel that they qualify then the dick is free. (for a fee) That way the cops can't say I'm slangin cock! lmao

But yea...I upped the vocals a lil...download it again and tell me if that's better.

LadySam · Post by **LadySam** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:41 pm

u should make soft songs more often =)

"So yea...certain ladies of Illest aren't excluded from this track. So for all my niggaz he don't speak up...this is for y'all. I know I've met a few shady hoez...no doubt. "

im definaty hoping this song does NOT include myself haha

bye kursee

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:43 pm

yeah homie its alot better, imo the hook would be ill with some background singing, i could do it but my mic qualitys shit and i can't sing

another thing you may wanna kill some of the intro, its a lil too much takes away the replay value imo, i'd prob. talk on the actual intro part and start rapping once the verse section comes in, or put a relevant movie clip about hoes in the intro and keep it how is

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:43 pm

LadySam wrote:u should make soft songs more often =)

"So yea...certain ladies of Illest aren't excluded from this track. So for all my niggaz he don't speak up...this is for y'all. I know I've met a few shady hoez...no doubt. "

im definaty hoping this song does NOT include myself haha

bye kursee

Since I'm a nice guy...I'ma give you a hint. It ain't you. But ur the only one I'm responding too.

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:43 pm

LadySam wrote:u should make soft songs more often =)

"So yea...certain ladies of Illest aren't excluded from this track. So for all my niggaz he don't speak up...this is for y'all. I know I've met a few shady hoez...no doubt. "

im definaty hoping this song does NOT include myself haha

bye kursee

its all about you wtf? couldn't you tell

LadySam · Post by **LadySam** » Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:45 pm

YAY ty <3

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 3:55 am

Kurse lol this was hot,reminds me of eminem songs 'superman' but kurse on his own supaman shit wit dis lmao..nice tho man....u shud do more songs like this,maybe not so 'fuck u bitch' all the time if u aint feelin that,but juz like Luda says 'tell it like it is' which u do..nice track -1-

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 7:06 am

"but i dunno ya'll gonna end up electricuting yaselves one of these days when you in a steamy cybersex session with your mouse cord tied around ya balls while you humping your keyboard "

hahahahhahahahahahhahaha

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 7:45 am

I believe this is the best song ive heard from you kurse and the sound quality is alot better now. though i wonder at your current life situation why would you be bothered by some online "shady-e-hoez".

-SoahKGniK- · Post by **-SoahKGniK-** » Wed Apr 11, 2007 10:57 am

Kurse man i absolutely hate ur nasely ass voice...but ur creative...

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