read please

[LadySam]

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streets as wild as the party next door
think twice bout bringing kinds into this war
only anticipation for good in this world comes with faith
faith, as ostracised as humans and their fate
lies, deception, rapidly becoming a new trend
the hearts you break will simply not mend
the guilty unscrupulously strike again
to revenge on the world like life is just pretend
innocents experience a life of ghastly sights
why oh why must these children see this light?
'thou shall not kill' means nothing at all
'thou shall murder dynamically in the name of the law'
infidelity surrounds our lives, let it be
people can't even obey vowels properly
technology updating while faith evaporates
blinded by this substitute we can't even concentrate
what can i say it is the world we live in mate.

[Ambiguous Realm]

'thou shall not kill' means nothing at all
'thou shall murder dynamically in the name of the law'

^^favorite bar

u seem to be improving step at a time, keep droppin

[Momeijah]

Nyeh, i Was Listening To The Deftones When i Read This And There is No Way i Was Pressin Pause. Played as Fuck Subject, Half Of it Flowed Ok, And Half The Time it Flowed Fucking God Awful. My Fav Bar Was The Same as Ekoms\'s Even Though There Was No Flow, Suppose ur Elevating With Vocab n Shit. it Was Pretty Shit in My Eyes, Keep Droppin Though ur improving.

[LadySam]

thank you boys

[*.HarleQuin.*]

domino quit being an asshole before i rip u..yeah U anyway sam this is muchh better great use of vocab and ur starting to pick up consisting rhymes..we should cypher soon = )

[~Symbolikull~]

i agree wit smoke, that was your best bar, and this is your best drop to date, its nice to see you elavation, its good to see determination, evern though you could drop more....

keep doin yuh thing girl

[LadySam]

cheers people

[-SoahKGniK-]

it was aight ...was it a poem? or a flow ?...either way it was okay...lady warlord?...u kurses girl?...lol ...KURSEEE are u e-dating?...