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Post by drunken jesus »

yo the don dick dimes palm grip nines
ball six times the average
its all slick i'm a savage
competitor words develop
stern and elegent firm embellishing
verses relevance to serve in telling em
my superb intellegence devilish
malevanent words i'm yelling em
serving cellebite herbs the jeletin
firm skeleton turning birds swelling them
to the girth of elephants bursting elements
of nerds and jealous men having em' nurse'ing relatives
burns and telling them not to squirm or yell again
the prefered selfishness i exert is helping them
learn the fella flip sherm ands selling them
birds and several sick prescription tabs and bottles
sipping jack and hostile gripping mags to drop you
get sitting back and watch dude
i'm flipping packs that got dudes
dumb off pills call em oxymorons
so i pump off mills come off chill
but the gun talk still dropping four on
anybody plotting war on the god,
so watch your door dog
the forearms'll pop for sure on
any block i tour on
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by complexity »

its all slick i'm a savage
competitor words develop
stern and elegent firm embellishing
verses relevance to serve in telling em
my superb intellegence devilish
malevanent words i'm yelling em
serving cellebite herbs the jeletin
firm skeleton turning birds swelling them
to the girth of elephants bursting elements
of nerds and jealous men having em' nurse'ing relatives
burns and telling them not to squirm or yell again
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Dope - my favorite part ^, lol,
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Post by 16 Micz »

pretty dope good use of vocab structure was average rhyme scheme was pretty dope too..what else?
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Post by drunken jesus »

thanks for all the feedback, i'll return the favor in a few
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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