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new Track "Eye 2 Eye"

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New Track Up On Myspace, "Eye 2 Eye, Which Features, Kurse On The Hook And 1st Verse/Diverse On The 2nd/Nasty On The 3rd/And Keefor On The 4th. Check This Shit Out, Let Us Know What You Think.
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It Was Ok..Didnt Really Feel It 2 Much..
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I Definetly Apreciate The Honest Feedback Man, Thanks Alot !!
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Post by drunken jesus »

i ain't feeling the beat, drumlines solid but the rest isn't sitting right

kurse - didn't like the delivery you used on this

hook - ain't feeling it

diverse - solid verse, need to work on changing your tone a lil bit more

nasty - pretty nice verse, i ain't really feeling his voice

keefor - pretty nice verse, i ain't really feeling his voice
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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iuno... i liked it... its not really that bad of a track... i even like the beat... iuno... not dickrydin but i like this different kind of shit... i just like the feel of the beat n shit... so yeah
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Everyone is definetly Going to have tehre own opinion about songs, some may like it others may not, it's not a dickriding thing, it's just some people like what others dont', i apreciate all the feed. Thanks For your Honestly it's always apreciated.
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