Mind Frame Of The Emcee (rewrite)

[complexity]

my mind frame is designed in the game, if ur an emcee I got a rhyme to ur name ||
if u got a hit I'll find a flame,if you got murdered I got a nine to blame ||
heard of skates I grind the same,heard a fate yours is intertwined with pain ||
I deserve the fate that is aligned with fame,thought I'd return to remind ya lames ||


am I that crazy to say that you rap lazy ||
we can take this back way before Jay Z ||
when ur spits were unexpected like a wack shady ||
come to find out ur just another crack baby ||
who gets more negative feedback then a battery ||
if u cant see that, I lyrically graduated from the academy ||
youll get three gatz shot at you laterally ||
all these emcees that say I cant rap flatter me ||
I'll gladly smash em' g Im half man slash emcee ||
Modern day axe hand, trashing a wack fan ||
an attraction, with killer rock like pakistan ||
still waiting for a reaction, from half the people im battlin ||
this is battle land bringing down rock like an avalanche ||
I use to have a plan, now Im an assassin ||
drafting more than cars in the fast n the furious ||
blasting murderous with these passioned verses ||
they were hoping id crack like the levee ||
im the best, you can quote me on that, Im already ||
proving the fact, as soon I spoke on the track ||
fuck a label, the promotion is wack ||
it can be fatal, to a career that has yet to prosper ||
bet the roster isnt stable ||
fuck it, thats why i wont accept the offers ||
plus when the money hits the table ||
life destructed, cuz its not a pay roll ||
its a tax deducted, grave hole ||

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[RH1NO]

my mind frame is designed in the game, if ur an emcee I got a rhyme to ur name ||
if u got a hit I'll find a flame,if you got murdered I got a nine to blame ||
heard of skates I grind the same,heard a fate yours is intertwined with pain ||
we deserve the fate that is aligned with fame,thought I'd return to remind ya lames ||

^^ thought this was dope

the rest was good too but the opener was the killer

[~*Blitz*~]

your opening bar definatley was good, the rest stuck with it and stayed on topic pretty well. I believe that you can rhyme any word someone throws in front of you lol, I think we should have a game and throw hard ass words to rhyme and watch you find something that rhymes with em and makes sense. anyyyyway this was my favorite bar...

they were hoping id crack like the levee ||
im the best, you can quote me on that, Im already ||
proving the fact, as soon I spoke on the track ||
fuck a label, the promotion is wack ||


Nice job plex