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-TraMaTiK-
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hmmmm-vt5201.html

Laughs...shakes his head..aight u lil tea sippin faggot...

listen kid what im sayin i mean this,u justa wanna be young star
u aint never slayin this genious,with ya false lines-n-dumb bars
u better be prayin u the meanest,cuz i can hurtcha without guns-by-far
but sadly man,playin with ya penis is the ONLY way ull 'cum hard!'
FINALLY ur revealin ur signs,insteada bein a bitch n concealin ur mind
but im treatin ur body like a banana the way im 'peelin ur spine'
and ur right the mods shud'remove ur shit',cuz ur juz squeelin in rhyme
but its like illest iz 'immune 2 gettin high',cuz nobody 'feelin ur lines!'
u say im'a fake?yet ur the one who shud think about stayin 'true 2 ur color'
cuz last time i checked U PRETENDED TO BE BLACK!,sayin'what it do brother?'
laughin with ya little father figure cole,like i aint hurd what u mutter
little bitch lookin like Clay Aiken,i wud hate ta see whos ur mother!
Jon can u sense the heat comin from my words,i see ur tense in defeat
so lets just commense the beef,cuz me dissin YOU'LL GIVE U SOME CENTS TA EAT!
but justa be fair-n-wise ill let u talk shit just so ur popularity'll rise
not like i care cuz i,know ur still in love with sam,i see the flare in ur eyes
ur heart broken so u grew ur hair out ta disguise,and bare all the lies
cuz deep down u really kno u want her 2 pick u,and not 'share with other guys'
so im spittin shots,yea my flames gettin hot,and gonna leave u witta partial-wig
i aint goin harsh atcha kid,but im'a make u'clean out ur closet'like Marshall-did
cuz ur an ugly fuck always been the 'ugly duck',i see now why this hoe iz wack
fuck ur raps son my flows leavin ur body dead-n-'blue' like ya photograph!
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Post by Lawgix »

i think u 2 should battle... get it over with
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself

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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

ye it'll prolly happen..but it was only natural 2 retailate
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

^^^word
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by LadySam »

this was actually probably the better things ive seen from you. not the best though, obviously. and leave dom alone! we love him lol
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

lol thanks sam..but hey he dropped suttin on me..so of course im gonna reply
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

we set a battle up and i dropped my verse but still yours is no where to be found????
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by precise »

no hate or anything, but i really wasnt feelin this too much, your punches were pretty basic similies that werent exactly used properly and the multies didnt all work, like off on lotsa syllables or just what was linked didnt really rhyme. dont think you wrote up to your ability
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Post by Momeijah »

k, if ur Gnna Diss Me. Avoid The \'Cum Hard\' Lines, Because They Were Played as Fuck Even in 1996. Still a Basic Flow Without Half The Disses i Had.
- if im Ugly How Come My Gf is a Real Girl ive Met And u Got Excited When Ghost Said u Looked Like a Broke Justin Timberlake?
- im Better Than u.
- Stop Rapping.
- Get Off ur Lil Teenage Fantasy Thinkin ur Gnna Become Famous Because u Hate ur Life Now.
- u STILL Pretend To Be Black ight Yoo -1-
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

lol i got 'excited' when he said somethin bout justin timberlake...YE OK Homo..anyways,lyrically u might be better,but better?naw..@battlin yea,but whatever thats the egotistical side of u showin again...and i dont 'thinkk' im gonna be famous,if it happens it happens,if it doesnt oh fuckin well..and tell me how sayin 'aight yo' is considered 'tryna be black' lmao when every fuckin race says 'aight' and 'yo' getta life u immature cunt...Whats said iz said and whats done iz done..and if u wanna prolong a pointless beef,be my guest im juz gonna laugh...1
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Post by Momeijah »

k 1st Of All This Beef isnt as Pointless as u Compulsively Making Blogs About Zea Like ur Obsessed With Her Every Two Minutes. Why Do u Care? Aint u The One Who Tried Talkin Dirty To Her On Msn? 2nd Of All Dont Even Lie About That JT Shit Because The Second Ghost Called u it, u Were All Up in Zea\'s Msn Like \'Some Chick Said i Look Like JT is This True???\'... And Dont Deny That, Shows u Look For Confidence in Net Girls Cuz No Real Ones Say Shit About ur Looks. insecure Are We? 3rd Of All, u Said i Was Acting Black Saying \'What it Do\'.... Yet ur The One Taking Pictures Of u Wearing Bandanas And Throwing Up Signs? And i Thought Phrases AKA \'What it Do?\' (Which i Supposedly Said) Are Multicultural? Make Up ur Mind u Fucking Hypocrit.

And Better Than u i Be, in Every Category, Whether its Songwriting Or Battling, Ask About Me Lol. And Dont Tell Me To Get a Life, Like i Said My Girl is Real And Yours Aint Even Revealed To u What She Looks Like Yet Lmao. All That i Mentioned Proves u Have No Life. And Dont Get All Excited That i Wrote a Post This Long Like \'Omg u Dont Have a Life u Write Paragraphs\'.. im Merely Stating Facts. So Morale Of The Story is, u Were in The Wrong All Along, Stop Nosing in Ppl\'s Business And Get Some Business Of ur Own, And Dont Cross Me Again, Ask About Me Lol 8)
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Post by RH1NO »

dam.. this shit just got hood...lmao
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Post by complexity »

haha, I think tramatic is a little underrated but domino has got the best of this beef so far
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Post by 134282 »

I agree with everything said here:
PrecisE wrote:no hate or anything, but i really wasnt feelin this too much, your punches were pretty basic similies that werent exactly used properly and the multies didnt all work, like off on lotsa syllables or just what was linked didnt really rhyme.
Couldn't have said it better myself.
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