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ill hang ya upside down, just like a bat hanging upside down in a tree//
in my hood, im the local rapper, and im the realest local emcee//
i stay high, flyin just like a bee, dont you agree? dont test me//
im the highest mother fucker, i aint like no one else your just like the rest B//
im a 16 year old white lyricsist, that knows math and is even good in geometry//
stop doing what your doing, you aint gonna be the next me, you aint gonna be no artistry//
im the biggest, im the bestest, im the meanist, im the willest to dedicate my life to rap//
your the smallest, worst, happiest, unwilling persom to dedicate your life to that//
step ya game up, ill take ya fame yup, you aint nothing but a fat chump//
im still high and still coughing from that fat blunt, yup//
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Post by Lawgix »

atleast u didn't record it...
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Post by BigP »

Lawgix wrote:atleast u didn't record it...
why?
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Post by Menace »

yo. that is possibly the worst stanza i have ever seen in my life.

you have just made everyone who read this stupider.

please stop while your life depends on it, pick a different hobby...

.... i recommend the South Beach Diet.
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Post by BigP »

Menace wrote:yo. that is possibly the worst stanza i have ever seen in my life.

you have just made everyone who read this stupider.

please stop while your life depends on it, pick a different hobby...

.... i recommend the South Beach Diet.
shiit nigga it aint dat bad..
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Post by RH1NO »

YO keep it simple you tried way too hard

spit about shit you know about n just write short lines at a time thatt

mean something n rhyme 1 word at a time n after you're good at that

rhyme 2 words n so on

this isnt even like a beginner verse you can really leave feed on

its terrible.....seriously
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Post by BigP »

how is it that bad?
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Post by RH1NO »

ill hang ya upside down, just like a bat hanging upside down in a tree//<-- said hang twice n was all filler words n basic

in my hood, im the local rapper, and im the realest local emcee//<-- said local twice n it was all filler n basic

i stay high, flyin just like a bee, dont you agree? dont test me// <-- sorry but its gay

im the highest mother fucker, i aint like no one else your just like the rest B// <---all filler , basic, forced

im a 16 year old white lyricsist, that knows math and is even good in geometry//<--all filler n basic

stop doing what your doing, you aint gonna be the next me, you aint gonna be no artistry//<-- basic filler makes no sense

im the biggest, im the bestest, im the meanist, im the willest to dedicate my life to rap//<-- dawg, bestest? basic filler

your the smallest, worst, happiest, unwilling persom to dedicate your life to that//< all filler n basic

step ya game up, ill take ya fame yup, you aint nothing but a fat chump//<--started like it was goin somewhere n ended it gay

im still high and still coughing from that fat blunt, yup//<-- short weak basic ending
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Post by BigP »

whats a filler? anyway you can make it so its better? please.
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Post by B-Bear »

it's just weird havina white dude calli another man nigga, either u a racist or mentally retarded.. i'll put my money on both..
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Post by BigP »

naw man i aint no racist man, it just u gotta giv me sum credit on dat, i aint as bad as my old shit...
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Post by B-Bear »

BigP wrote:i aint as bad as my old shit...
lmfao!
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Post by BigP »

B-Bear wrote:
BigP wrote:i aint as bad as my old shit...
lmfao!
Ok mr. bear, let me see what you can do.
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*.HarleQuin.* wrote:link
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