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Gangster with gay-rags//
Spit striaght to slay-fags//
Stitched mouth so you stay-gag//



You legs and arm i-amputate//
Concentrate to decimate to demonstrate//
To set mines then detonate//elevate just to educate//
estimate then fabricate kill but never hesitate//
opertate the punctuate just
Im A Hustla: :For me to hate//
Chocke you till you suffocate//
Till you hyper ventilate//
Competion i dominate and annihlate//
To impress the "State" assassinate//
Rhymes collaborate//lines that i obliterate//
Kill you So you wouldnt retaliate//



My words produce an action//
Quick and swift that reduces-your-reaction//
Distraction to extract subtract like worthless fraction//















My ability to kill my enemy//
To commit a first-degree felony//
History of my infancy//
Shoot more bullets than an infantry//
The legacy of my poetry//
Your illiteracy becomes your humility//My immunity//
People i killed captured in photography//
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Post by complexity »

this was some pretty decent shit, especially considering you were writing it on palace
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Post by 16 Micz »

nice rhyming as well as rhyme scheme, i liked it 7.5/10 keep it up chico.
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Thanks for the feed fellas
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