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Dead Silence
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Post by Dead Silence »

wow dude that was really good

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Steady Doin Drive Bys My Two Cannons Shoot
i'll intercept Ya Passes Like Tha Buchannons Dood
i'm in Tha Secondary My Macs Are Playin Safety
i'll Pop Ya Quarter Back Ya Better Play it Safely

i like the wordplay on it man keep this shit up man now u gotta record it jsut a random diss to sum1
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Post by B-Bear »

the first half of ya verse - dope! I loved it

u struggle a bit with a choppy flow.. especially in the second part, like when the second line in a bar is shorter then the first, then it usually sounds choppy, depends on which words u're usin.. try and focus on gettin a more consistent structure.. cause u got some really nice punches in this one.. unfortunately, u lost it in the second part.. but u had some good bars in that part as well.. keep it up!
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Post by SlickMex »

I agree with B-bear..You had some nice lines in this drop..BTW..just letting you know thats Amare is how you spell it..lol..Just work on the structure
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