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I'm more-than-sick, eliminatin flocks-of-borin-pricks..
And battlers terrified and refusin to drop-before-this-shit..
U could write ur best shit and ill still mop-the-floor-with-it..
Gotta be "tight ass" and i mean more than to stop-the-force-of-dicks..
Ill drop u on the curb, then youll be "holdin-the-street-down"..
For real u wannabe thugs, youll get floored-then-a-beat-down..
Take a shot at my crew that means ur warrin-with-me-now..
But that aint possible, we got hustlas in every corner-in-three-towns..
Farmer ass niggas cant even talk shit they just stick-with-they-peeps..
Draggin "roots" out the ground the only way ya be rippin-the-beats/beets..
Im so crazy i play chicken-with-three bitches-on-skiis..
U niggaz is all talk/tok, now u "tickin" me off cuz u a bitch-in-da-streets..


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Post by complexity »

sweet 100 syllables a bar...

4/10...

Didn't impress me..
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Post by ~Callister~ »

Appreciate tho
It was only a quick ish without punchies.
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Lady always on my mind, girl can you imagine it? "
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Post by complexity »

Bump that up to "7/10" if it was a freestyle..

I just hope to see some content down the road.
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AHHHH it Was Aright, i Aint into The Whole \'Use as Many Multis as Fucking Possible\' Style But if it Was Just 5 Mins.. Coo i Suppose at Least u Know Wat Multis Are And a Couple Of Punches.
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Post by ~Callister~ »

Yeah man
lol thanks fo da 7
And yeah i do know what punches are
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Post by Gold. »

If you seriously wrote it in 5 mins then that wasnt half bad, flow was shakey here and there but the multies were aight, not much more i can say good drop
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

ye pretty good for 5 mins..nothin more i cud say that the other ppl didnt..sept it was nce for 5mins..take ur time next time and show us what ur mind can bring..peace
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

eh u doesn't seemed rush with the wordplay involved.. hopefully we'll see something that wasn't freestyled so we can see how good u actually r.. decent wordplay and multis tho.. 7/10
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i Ghostwrote This Shit Btw.
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Post by Dead Silence »

really?
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Yeah in Like 5 Mins, Felt Bored.
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Post by Dead Silence »

lol so u just gave it to that bitch or w.e to use? lol
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Well.. Yah.
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haha thats nice lol
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